Writing meme

Jan 29, 2009 22:33

Ooh, writing meme! I can never resist these...to do or to visit at other people's.

Comment with a story I've written, and I will tell you something I knew, learned, or wondered about while writing it that didn't make it onto the page.

Gakked from kalquessa.

You can find all my fic listed here.

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aurora_novarum January 30 2009, 17:10:21 UTC
Oooh, Revelation and Damnation...

As she dressed in clean garb-she wondered what would happen when she went to the infirmary? Would Janet recognize what-no, not Janet. Never again would it be Janet. She closed her eyes to that remembered pain. Would Warner or one of the others sense she change she now felt beat within her? The damnation she exuded despite all the assurances to the contrary? How would...That ellipses is where I actually had a new revelation while writing the draft ( ... )

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sg_betty January 30 2009, 17:27:03 UTC
I found it extremely chilling and dramatic just as is... I don't know what you could have done that would make it more horrifying!

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