Comments | aurora_foxglove: Just Like a Pill (5/?)

aurora_foxglove

Just Like a Pill (5/?)

Apr 03, 2011 23:58

Based off the YJ_anon_meme prompt:
"So, Robin is actually a girl, but dresses and acts like a boy because of what happens to little girls in Gotham. The team find out and have to deal with not only their betrayal, but having to completely change their expectations.
Bonus! The guys start getting protective, and Robin shows them that she doesn't need ( Read more... )

young justice, robin(dick), superboy, aqualad(kaldur), dick grayson, miss martian(megan), s: just like a pill, kid flash(wally), artemis

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Anon anonymous April 5 2011, 13:35:52 UTC

Ahhhhh, you guysssss.
Their anger is somewhat justified though they just don't understand Gotham isn't like any other town. It holds the truly the most despicable scum in the world who are far more murderous (among other things).
Though Batman's plan to kill off Robin was kinda screwed up.
Another great chapter! Keep up the great work

Re: Anon aurora_foxglove April 8 2011, 03:29:25 UTC

Thank you!!

karaq April 5 2011, 22:26:43 UTC

.... Ok. I was a sceptic at first, but daaaaamn.... You had me converted. This story really drew me in; GORGEOUS in-character writing!
I loved the team's interaction, Batman's schemes and of course ROBIN!

More soon please! :)

~KaraQ

karaq April 7 2011, 21:20:06 UTC

Btw, will we see Roy (Red Arrow) and his reaction too?! With his temper, it would certainly be...interesting. ;)

aurora_foxglove April 8 2011, 03:28:27 UTC

Thank you!!! :D

Also, I am planning on getting Roy's reaction. I've just got a lot going on in rl right now. Three more weeks in the semester! So, bear with me. I'll definitely still be writing, but I'm gonna have to cut back so as to not fail at real life.

30deadcrows April 7 2011, 00:03:58 UTC

oh.. oh wow.

I decided to keep my comments until now, after I read all that you have in one go.

I don't regret that. This is brilliant and I love it.

Looking forward to the next installment.

Also, I think any OOCness is forgivable. I didn't really see any but I'm thinking that this is a lot to take in and hormones are a bitch so that's where that might come from. And as for Superboy, I can see him piecing things together in his own way and then having a moment of clarity that's startling.

Keep up the good work! <3

aurora_foxglove April 8 2011, 03:45:14 UTC

Thank you so much!!! I'm really glad this fic is so well received! <3

I'm glad you were able to grasp where I was coming from with the OOC that was required for Robin to actually be female and I'm super glad you didn't see any other characters looking too out of whack. I hate fanfics that take a character's name and face and stick it on an entirely different person. I really try not to be that fic writer. If someone does act too out of whack for the love Dick Grayson TELL me!

Thank you so much again for the love!

30deadcrows April 15 2011, 18:30:22 UTC

the only way you can take a name and face and make them OOC is if they're on drugs. or pod person or something so huge it would impact them in such a manner. and if it does happen, then it better get explained like whoa afterward!

Not to worry! I will tell you! for the love of Dick Grayson and his beautiful ass. *needs to get off Tumblr!*

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aurora_foxglove April 13 2011, 05:49:12 UTC

Thank you for the lovely review!
The next part is actually over half written, I'm just mad at a couple kinks that don't want to smooth themselves out. It should be up by the end of this coming week end though. I'll need a break from killing myself via finals, anyhow.

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aurora_foxglove April 16 2011, 21:07:35 UTC

Thank you for the understanding! Due to a rather cushy house-sitting job, I got part 6 cranked out!! :D

Also, I may take you up on that offer. I've possibly got a plot dilemma coming up. (Two directions, but only one can get written!) And if I can't work out which way I want to go myself, I'd love to ask your opinion for part 7.