I remember vividly how I was giggling like crazy when I wrote the first two parts (my seatmate looked weirdly at me, but he couldn't care less what I was doing, lol) because I could so totally imagine them like that too.
(Can I comment here? Am I allowed to o-o? ..I'll just comment here anyway).
I really liked how you wrote this- only including the dialogue, sound effects, and the setting. Without describing anything else, it really felt like I was in the dark too and like all I was doing was using my sense of hearing when, really, I was only using my sight. Really cool :)
Oh, and really sweet fic :D. The way you write their interactions - well, dialogue, really - is just <3
(I just used the word "really" a kajillion times right now.
You're allowed! :D I think anyone who has a Livejournal account can view my entries and comment on them..
That was actually what I was going for when I decided to leave out details when I wrote this. I wanted it to be a quick read, I wanted the characters to speak for themselves, and I wanted the situations to seem real. And, as you explained it, I didn't use imagery to highlight the fact that they're talking at nights, it's dark, they can only hear things.. I'm very happy you appreciated the thought I put into this. :D
this is slightly different from your usual style, isn't it? but it's still so cute XD
I love their bickering, that's just so KyuWook XD Kyuhyun is such a kid, insisting on playing until he wins, yet he stay with Wook anyway, so sweet XDDDD and the last bit is so fluffy I think we'll get diabetes just by reading lol
Yes, it's very different, actually. And I think that's why I didn't post it right after I had written it; I didn't know how people would react, lol.
And I think Kyu is really rather sweet and caring inside -- he'll actually accompany Ryeowook despite being very sleepy since he feels rather guilty. But of course, he's very proud too, so he can't stand losing to anyone in rock-paper-scissors. XD
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I like it, really I do ^^
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Seriously. I can just imagine hearing that... I would... it's almost too much for my little fangirl heart to imagine. 0_0......Wooooaaahhhh
And the three words before falling asleep.....awwwwww.....
And oh, oh - I love the rock-paper-scissors bit, and the jokes at the beginning! XD It would be so like them to do things like that XDDD
XDDDD
Cuteness - so fluffy XD
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Thanks for reading and commenting, hon! :)
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Showing their night interactions through the years, really good concept :D
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I really liked how you wrote this- only including the dialogue, sound effects, and the setting. Without describing anything else, it really felt like I was in the dark too and like all I was doing was using my sense of hearing when, really, I was only using my sight. Really cool :)
Oh, and really sweet fic :D. The way you write their interactions - well, dialogue, really - is just <3
(I just used the word "really" a kajillion times right now.
Really.)
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That was actually what I was going for when I decided to leave out details when I wrote this. I wanted it to be a quick read, I wanted the characters to speak for themselves, and I wanted the situations to seem real. And, as you explained it, I didn't use imagery to highlight the fact that they're talking at nights, it's dark, they can only hear things.. I'm very happy you appreciated the thought I put into this. :D
Thanks for reading and commenting!
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but it's still so cute XD
I love their bickering, that's just so KyuWook XD
Kyuhyun is such a kid, insisting on playing until he wins, yet he stay with Wook anyway, so sweet XDDDD
and the last bit is so fluffy I think we'll get diabetes just by reading lol
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And I think Kyu is really rather sweet and caring inside -- he'll actually accompany Ryeowook despite being very sleepy since he feels rather guilty. But of course, he's very proud too, so he can't stand losing to anyone in rock-paper-scissors. XD
Thanks for reading and commenting!
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