Comments | authicer_ray: Camera Obscura

authicer_ray

Camera Obscura

Mar 26, 2009 20:54

Just returned from a very enjoyable few days in Edinburgh with my dearly beloved better-half.

Had a wonderful time exploring, helped in no small measure by the presence of a travelling companion with infinite patience for my frequent stops to take notes and peer intently at random bits of scroll-work. A patience helped, no doubt, by her own desire ( Read more... )

monster lounge, writing, short story, quickened dead

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authicer_ray March 27 2009, 11:52:13 UTC

Yes, that`s really all there is to do. If I submit the piece as-is, the ending makes it rather difficult to expand the story futher. Given what happens to the main antagonist at least.
So I`ll need to re-work the ending again. As for the lounge-sequence? I`m actually considering omitting that altogether and going with another title. Not sure about that though.