Stealing the Show

[authoraubrie]

Comments

[isleburroughs]

If they're not drowning the mc out too much I wouldn't worry about it.

Otherwise maybe the mc needs a major flaw or something to make him/her more interesting.

Bad guys usually are more intriguing for some reason.

[authoraubrie]

That's so true! I'll think about my MC...maybe she's too perfect.

[isleburroughs]

I tried to give my mc more flaws even though he already had some because the bad guys and his girlfriends are so colorful but the story wouldn't let me force flaws on him. So he's got a few and I'll just have to take him as he is, mostly a really nice guy.