The Shape of Happiness

Apr 16, 2005 17:38

Sorry Nick...the devil made me do it. I watched CSI on Thursday and I couldn't get that shower scene out of my head.

Schmoop demanded to be written, even worse...Sara/Greg het schmoop. Again, Nick...really sorry buddy. Just know that in one part of my brain you and Greg are doing it like rabbits, all day, every day.

Spoilers for 4X4 obviously.

Greg Sanders normally didn’t lie. He may have exaggerated, stretched the truth, embroidered for effect-but flat out lie. Not usually. And he wouldn’t have had to, if it weren’t for that damn tattoo of Sara’s. )

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stumbelina April 16 2005, 22:29:32 UTC
Perfect fluff!

I have such a soft spot for this pairing and finding cute quality Greg/Sara right here on my flist?

::happy sigh::

I just had to google an image of a serotonin molecule because the idea of that tattoo tickles me.

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autobadgirl April 16 2005, 23:39:30 UTC
Thank you! Sometimes all you want is a nice happy little shippy story...

girlnorth on my flist also writes some wonderful Greg/Sara, so check her out too.

Well I was going to give Sara the DNA strand tat..but then the idea evolved and voila.

In a way that molecule is better for her because serotonin only works when produced in the subject's brain...injected it has a similar effect to wasp venom. I can just see Sara digging that idea.

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girlnorth April 17 2005, 00:47:35 UTC
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love you, I love you, I love you! That was perfect. I loved the premise of the tattoo and bet (because yeah, I can totally see Sara having another tattoo somewhere more private), and Greg doing something really sweet and not even really realizing how incredibly sweet it is.

It's really nice to see you writing Greg/Sara, there's such a lack of good fic in that section of the fandom. And thanks for the pimp, too. ::blushes::

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autobadgirl April 17 2005, 03:07:00 UTC
::blushblushblush:: My dear...I owe it all to you. I never would have dreamed I could without that first story I wrote for you.

Well, I saw Jorja's tat and sat back and went...damn! I wonder if she has more...and where they could be...and then my brain did its thing and this schmoop was the result.

Thank you again! *superhugs*

(and I'll pimp you anytime lady...I *meant* to give you feedback at FF.net on the latest S/G story (Sad Sara in the bathroom sleeping on the floor *meep*) but it was being pissy and wouldn't let me. )

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stumbelina April 17 2005, 11:25:25 UTC
Hi... Just wanted to let you know I am friending you. I have realised that actually adding some quality CSI fandom journals to my flist would be a good thing. I do need to warn you that I am about as interesting as a slightly dusty patch of floor and have fallen out of the habit of posting but I have a current scary obsession with Sara so um, hello. Again.

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slynn6776 April 17 2005, 01:17:58 UTC
girlnorth pointed the way and I'm *so* glad she did! This was awesome. I loved every word.

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autobadgirl April 17 2005, 03:11:16 UTC
Well thank you very much! I've seen your name in and around the CSI fandom (and read some of your work) so I am flattered and more than a little chuffed with the feedback. *beams*

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starry_midnight April 17 2005, 02:28:18 UTC
I can't even find the right words-at least not coherent ones. That was absolutely, amazing! Ah! One of the very best sara/greg I've ever read, ever. It was perfect! Thank you!

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autobadgirl April 17 2005, 03:13:18 UTC
One of the very best sara/greg I've ever read, ever. It was perfect! Thank you!

Baie'la! No...thank you. That's wonderful feedback! :) I'm gonna get a swelled head now...

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cherry_amber April 17 2005, 02:50:18 UTC
I was also pointed this way by girlnorth, this was a wonderful story. I loved the concept of the story with the tattoo, (cool idea by the way). You're a wonderful writer.

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autobadgirl April 17 2005, 03:17:10 UTC
Thank you. One of my hard and fast bulletproof kinks for any fiction are tattoo stories...so I had to take a stab at writing my own.

Then I watched the episode and it was like the fic fairies dropped a bomb on my head with the whole idea. A little messing about on Google and boom...one fluffy tattoo fic. My muses are an odd but merry crew...

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