Deflowering Alias Fic Challenge Posting

Mar 23, 2004 08:54

So once again the brilliantly mad and all round brilliant lunasky is hosting a fic challenge at her community clandestine_ops. So I think I'm the first to post my story, "Do You Do Windows Too?". It's fluffy, a real departure from my normal style--I'm worried it's so sweet it might make your teeth ache, anyway...( here it is, warning I finished this late last night and only got four hours sleep so I may have missed something, but I just had to be first... )

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lunasky March 23 2004, 09:43:35 UTC
Gaaaaaaaaah!

What have you done to me girl? You've turned me into a big puddle of mush. Again!

My god. I laughed so hard, and then the smut was so hot, and then I laughed some more. You are an evil, evil genius. Mike the plumber - I love it!

Can I join your fanclub? Please??? I can be a good devoted fangirl, I promise. I can stalk and obsess and squee like the best of them. :)

PS. Don't forget to post it in clandestine_ops! It definitely needs to be immortalized there.

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autobadgirl March 23 2004, 11:11:34 UTC
Hee! ::blushes:: So it didn't suck despite the lack of darkness and the *ahem* bending of the rules slightly? Good to know. I was worried--this is a departure for me--moving from angsty drama to fluffy screwball comedy.

Dude you know I'm your fangirl so of course you can be mine! :)

I've already posted a link to it in Clandestine Ops under the Deflowering Alias post but do you mean just post the whole dang thing?

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lunasky March 23 2004, 11:19:20 UTC
Ahem...no it didn't suck. Far, far from it. And I loved the twist on the theme.

Well if you don't want to post the whole dang thing could you post the header and then a link to your story? Please? *batting my eyelashes* The reason for this madness is so I can easily put it in the memories section of the community...and the fact that I want as many people as possible to see it. I'm evil that way, I know.

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autobadgirl March 23 2004, 11:22:33 UTC
Ohh got it... Will do Fearless leader!

I'm sorry did I mention I'm running on four hours sleep? So big with the stupid today...

I promise to post it soon as I can get a free moment!

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daera23 March 23 2004, 13:50:28 UTC
Oh dear lord I LOVE THIS!

It's just, just . . . gah

Where are my words?

This is so perfect - naughty little French maid fantasy, but - twist - not really the French one but her Iowa sister. Wow.

And I love how it really was Syd and Vaughn playing this game - how you captialized on how Syd's job is to role play. She's very good at it. She's snared intel from many, many a macho man, just by turning on a bit of female innocence.

And I love how Vaughn really did give into this baser guy fantasy. And such great build up!

Oh this fic is totally turning me into a silly fangirl.

I would call this so sweet it makes your teeth ache - I'd call this good and dirty fun! I like how you elaborated on the Syd and Vaughn you set up in We Like to WatchAnd I am really glad you got inventive with the deflowering - I hope more people do. The last thing we need is a bunch of Mary Sues ( ... )

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autobadgirl March 24 2004, 11:49:51 UTC
::checks head for swelling:: Hee-hee! I am so glad you liked it and
hey Wow! Thanks for the crack_van posting too! I didn't realize until my dear, dear friend nwhepcat sent me a little email that said,
"You made Crack Van! In just one day!!!!

::high fives you and fans self::

Gotta read that when it's not all over the work screen"

::boggles at the response:: Can I just say I love my fandom and all who are in it! Y'all are making me blush big time!

I like how you elaborated on the Syd and Vaughn you set up in We Like to Watch
Seriously I'm not kidding all thanks for this fic idea are owed to spy_barbie! But it sure was fun to write so I'm fairly positive there will be a sequel, I keep hearing Weiss ragging on Vaughn about it in my head...
::hugs::

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jujubinha March 23 2004, 14:07:43 UTC
OHMYGOD!

Gah!. I have no words! Oh my God, you wrote my fave ship again! And damn, was that hot! Smoking! Dude! I love the whole plot, the whole teasing, the whole game, and the ending was the sweetest... Hee! Syd really knows how to turn on a guy, she knows their fantasies and desires very deeply - sure, she lives doing that for God and the country, she must know how to bring that, huh, up (hee!), but I love that she also has fun with it - that she is willing to play the game for the pleasure, for her man... Very, very good! I have no words! Really. I'm a puddle of goo!

And I agree with dae, now you *must* write a sequel! Come on! Mike the plumber? I would pay good money to see that! Amazing, amazing! :D

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autobadgirl March 24 2004, 11:54:32 UTC
::huggles Ju:: Well I guess I'll just have to keep on writing this ship again then won't I? Especially if it's your favorite!

but I love that she also has fun with it - that she is willing to play the game for the pleasure, for her man...
I love Angsty!Syd I do, but sometimes I feel *so* bad for those two crazy kids, this story is all about giving them at least one happy day together. Plus Goofy!InLove!Syd and Vaughn make me smile like a fool.

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Oh my.... madam_rptr March 23 2004, 14:55:40 UTC
I'm not even sure now how I found this...someone friended you who friended someone else who I've friended, I guess. It doesn't really matter now because that is absolute perfection! The imagery had me blushing so that I had to close my office door...thank you. Just -- thank you.

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Re: Oh my.... autobadgirl March 24 2004, 11:56:40 UTC
You are most welcome! And thank you for the lovely feedback:)

The imagery had me blushing so that I had to close my office door... Hee now you know why I stayed up till two am to finish this...I just couldn't sleep with those two carrying on like that in my head!

::hugs::

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Re: Oh my.... madam_rptr March 24 2004, 23:01:11 UTC
“Don’t take this the wrong way…but uh Wendy I’d really like to fuck my girlfriend now, so you’ll have to take a hike.”

So I totally forgot to tell you how this was one of my favorite moments in this fic! And my husband doesn't know it, but he would be thanking you right now for the benefits he received today from my reading this over and over again in my mind.

Did I tell you how much I love it? And now you're gonna write more sweet/sexy shippiness...um, yeah, go ahead and add me to your stalker list, please!

::hugs ya back::

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ciachick711 March 23 2004, 15:13:32 UTC
This was too freakin' hilarious!!! Loved it--I want to see Mike the plumber!

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autobadgirl March 24 2004, 11:58:59 UTC
Thank-you!

And I am pretty sure "Mike the Plumber" (and am I the only one who hears bow-chicka-bow-bow when I type that) will be making a house call to Sydney very soon ;)

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