as she screams, screams, screams into the darkness.

Oct 02, 2007 21:49

Hello all.

On Sunday I realised how much of a Twilight song How to Save a Life is, so I decided to write a ficlet, in the process of writing a short one for
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words words words, jacob/bella ftw, edward/bella of sparkletown, twilight - fanpire

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daintress October 2 2007, 12:48:15 UTC
The song itself is fairly confusing, but I think you've made it work well with the story you're telling. :)

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autumn_scarlet October 2 2007, 12:50:22 UTC
Haha thankyou lovely.

To be honest, I don't even know what story I was telling. I just told it. =)

But thankyou just the same.

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daintress October 2 2007, 13:50:55 UTC
It seemed to me you were telling the story of a woman's right to change her mind. And the men who respect that. Lol!

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autumn_scarlet October 2 2007, 23:31:48 UTC
Haha. Perhaps I was.

I suppose the reader can take from it what they will.

I took it as a Jacob/Bella fic, where as nicole (love_eachother) took it as Edward/Bella.

Haha.

I'm glad you've put something deeper than that into it though.

=)

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red_dress7 October 5 2007, 00:04:35 UTC
I love it! The Fray just happens to be one of my favorite bands...

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autumn_scarlet October 5 2007, 01:57:21 UTC
Awh, thankyou very much.

I love them as well, actually, I love any band/artist who throws out metaphoric, and meaningful lyrics, haha.

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meteor_love_17 October 5 2007, 14:41:36 UTC


aww
I had to read it twice to completely get the story (as im so tired), but its beautiful. Her indecisions about what she wants, who she wants and how she can't have both.
Very true to the story Phoebe.
I liked it
glad she goes back to Edward!!!
good work Phoebe, you got the song to go real well with this story.
xxx
sleep time

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