Dear John,

[autumn_scarlet]

Dear Charlie Dad,

I don’t really know where to begin this letter. When you hugged me goodbye, you didn’t really comprehend what kind of goodbye it was. From anyone else it would be ‘goodbye, I’ll see you later’, but this wasn’t, and I’m sorry. You asked me to give you the chance to hug me goodbye, and I did, as well as I could - I just wish

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[kissingdaylight]

I enjoyed this as I really have all the Dear John letters. It was sweet to see in your writing the strong bond that the two had formed.

it was only then that he realised she was never coming home - that she would never sleep in that bed (with the window open wide), that that red truck would never rumble loudly down the road

That is so the hardest part of losing someone and you wrote it perfectly.

Just one question though, how did Bella stage her death? Because that really matters if she said she knew it was coming. Does Charlie think she killed herself? Because that would definitely change the tone of his section. And with Bella being a vamp now I can understand why she didn't cry for him again but I don't think it's realistic that a father would never cry over his daughter dying at 19 again.

Still, lovely.

[autumn_scarlet]

Thankyou very much <3

Re: OMG!!!!!

[autumn_scarlet]

=) Thankyou very much I'm glad you liked it

[autumn_scarlet]

Thankyou very much, I'm glad you like it and that I managed to stay true to character.

Again, thankyou. <3