Refrain

Apr 01, 2011 03:06

Title: Refrain
Genre: Angst
Pairing: Ohmiya
Rating: PG
A/N: Spin off from fliuor's amazing fic, To be Better Than This. It has a different ending, and it is a one shot, so many things are rushed, and i think it might be rather confusing, especially around the end, as I wrote it at 5.00am, and was falling half asleep...Fliuor's version is way better...but ( Read more... )

fanfics, p:ohno/nino, one shot

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autumnarashi April 1 2011, 13:55:11 UTC
thanks...in a sense, maybe they did have their happy ending...they were together...and Ohno understood nino...

thanks for reading!

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nin0t0 April 1 2011, 03:11:41 UTC
waa.. at first I thought it would be happy end, since I already read the original one which it's so sad,, but I like this where nino loves ohchan so much, thats great~
thank for sharing :-D

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autumnarashi April 1 2011, 13:55:46 UTC
haha...sorrie to disappoint...thanks for reading!

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ichi_toshimiya April 1 2011, 03:13:24 UTC
I only just wish them to be happy together....
Thanks for sharing it this...

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autumnarashi April 1 2011, 13:56:27 UTC
maybe they were in the end...since now they fully understand each other...

thanks for reading and commenting

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kitkatgrl16 April 1 2011, 06:14:19 UTC
WOW. I wasn't expecting an ending like that at ALL. :O

Super well written! :D I like how it worked out here!

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autumnarashi April 1 2011, 13:57:58 UTC
*blushes* thanks for your kind comment!

Thanks for reading as well...glad you liked it

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bubbledrops April 1 2011, 10:31:21 UTC
i like this version too :D
but, my heart hurts for them...
when i found this fic at that site, i couldnt help screaming(without a voice ^^;) that i can read a happy ending! but...
it was really sad all over again, but thank you for writing this :)

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autumnarashi April 1 2011, 14:01:59 UTC
oh gosh..i am so sorry for disappointing you....but in a sense, it is a happy ending for them...nino need not live his miserable life with his miserable secret anymore, and Ohno understands nino...and in the end, they were together...so maybe it counts as a happy ending? haha...

thanks for liking it..and for commenting!

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bubbledrops April 3 2011, 14:56:01 UTC
sorry about a late reply. but for some reason... i thought i have to say more to extend my thought.

well, i couldnt expect that you would apologize to me for my comment. aaaah... i didnt mean it. it was my fault that i caused myself a misunderstand by just only read this a/n, really ;; (and said that out laud...)
rather im sorry more than you.
ne, i was really glad that you managed to make a remixing fic which i like it too, still now!

i might be happy if i can find your name again at a fic comm someday :D

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autumnarashi April 3 2011, 16:17:51 UTC
haha...thanks again for your comment..

i'll try my hardest to write more fics...please do look out for more of those in the future.

thanks for reading and liking it! it means a lot to me!

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