#073. The Other One

[autumnsxxangel]

Broken Delusions
#073. The Other one, Doojoon/Dongwoon
Fic:  1/100
A/N: Beta-ed by playfulninja
 He knew his place, where he stood, his position in the relationship. It was achingly clear, like sharp shards of broken glass cutting into his skin, a constant reminder trailing down in the form of crimson tears.

“You’re an idiot,” was what Junhyung said, watching him

Comments

[ieopon]

This. Was. Phenomenal.

I love it.

I'll admit, I'm a hardcore Kiwoon shipper but this, this story, made me a closet Doowoon shipper. Kekeke. It's my guilty pleasure now.

And I absolutely adore your writing style, what with the colorful vocabulary, emotional exploration, and some sort of figurative language that I can never get the hang of. Personally, I'm more of a dialogue/action/drama writer and so I hold this kind of metaphorical writing to very high regards. I'm very envious, indeed.

Also, I really enjoyed the mood of the story as well, that angsty, hopeless atmosphere. Angst is my crack. Lol.

I sincerely do hope you'll be writing more BEAST fanfictions after this one because I'll be sure to read them~~

~~ieopon

[autumnsxxangel]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like my writing style. It means a lot to me actually because I always feel like I'm missing something when I write.

And I love Doowoon. Doowoon and 2jun are my ultimate weaknesses. Hahaha.