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Jul 31, 2009 23:32

First time wrting smut, so don't kill me if it's horrible!  This was suppose to have a plot or at least some sort of feastible storyline.....
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usxuk, axis power hetalia

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neko_chwan August 1 2009, 20:04:05 UTC
brb nosebleeding forever.

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autumnsxxangel August 1 2009, 20:27:12 UTC
So it wasn't horrid?

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neko_chwan August 3 2009, 00:39:32 UTC
D: of course not~

You should post it on the community xD

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autumnsxxangel August 3 2009, 19:15:03 UTC
Hmm, I guess I'll go check out the rules and post it, then...

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greenpanic6 August 3 2009, 19:57:35 UTC
awsome i liked the ending words

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autumnsxxangel August 3 2009, 20:13:07 UTC
Heehee, thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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awww_applesauce August 3 2009, 20:27:06 UTC
D: So amazing! <3

Ending word were epic. ;D

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autumnsxxangel August 3 2009, 21:24:26 UTC
Glad you liked them! It just seemed like something America and England would say to each other.

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tanya_tsuki August 4 2009, 01:33:03 UTC
For your first time writing smut, it was pretty hot ^_^

I know you posted it to the Hetalia comm, but what about the usxuk comm? I'm sure there are quite a few people over there who'd enjoy this.

Actually...I thought you posted it on the Hetalia comm but I don't see it there, now? I'm not sure how I found this otherwise ^^'

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autumnsxxangel August 4 2009, 03:57:00 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! And that's a good suggestion. I'll go check it out.

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sephydark August 4 2009, 04:33:29 UTC
Ah, that was pretty good. Especially if it's your first time. The ending words were amazing.

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autumnsxxangel August 4 2009, 18:07:29 UTC
Why thank you!

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