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ava_lava

Filling the Void

May 21, 2011 13:43

Title: Filling the Void

Pairing(s): HanChul

Genre(s): Romance

Length: 4227 words

Rating: PG-13

Summary: In which Han Geng and Heechul are alone no more.

Inspiration(s): I walked by a construction site and saw a young skinny guy at the top, and all of a sudden I thought of this plotline.

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( Not all things work out the way people want them to. Sometimes it’s a good thing. )

pairing: hanchul

Comments 8

ink_river10 August 4 2011, 00:54:04 UTC

I love this! I love how you show each of their POV's with the same scene....that is difficult to write but if done well can be amazing, and you did well!

This line got me the most: "Han Geng went through life with a solid titanium protective emotional covering."

*sighs* I hope that Heechul finds a way past that. I would love more of their story but this seems like just a one shot. In any case, I enjoyed it very much! :)

ava_lava August 5 2011, 00:33:32 UTC

Actually, my piano teacher gave me that line (she said that I was too mechanical with my playing). I thought that it would match any celebrity's lives since that's what idols have to do in order to live in society.

Glad you liked this one! It's very personal to me.

dilovesyunjae August 4 2011, 07:15:20 UTC

awwwww....would be great to read about them hooking up..oh well..:)

ava_lava August 5 2011, 00:34:07 UTC

*puts into agenda*

followurdestiny August 4 2011, 11:39:56 UTC

such a beautiful touching story -- tears were starting to gather -- love, loved, love -- the unexpected can be a wonderful thing indeed ...
*huggles them both* <333 amazingly written!

ava_lava August 5 2011, 00:36:45 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I did some soul-searching while writing this one.

tokkei_12 August 4 2011, 18:48:21 UTC

Whoot whoot! Han Geng as a construction worker by day and a serial killer by night~ Hotness times two :D And I do like how Heechul is still as awesome and persuasive as ever- the bit with him taking the front seat instead of Kyuhyun was just hilarious XD The Heechul/Zhou Mi friendship was also very nice as well. But gah, the gorgeousness that is two lonely people who are alone yet are able to find something in each other just really warms my heart, especially with the realistic bit about them still having a few issues. Loved this!

ava_lava August 5 2011, 00:37:54 UTC

Sometimes rumors have the strangest ways of forming lawl. Thank you for reading!