Natural Order

[ava_lava]

Title: Natural Order

Pairing(s): QMi

Genre(s): Romance, sci-fi!AU

Length: 4049 words

Rating: PG-18

Summary: In a world based on perfection and order, Kyuhyun learns that love is anything but perfect and orderly.

Inspiration(s): I just wanted to touch on what would be the “perfect world”, loosely based on John Lennon’s song Imagine. Written for leprixx's

Comments

[enolha]

I think I'm in love with you now.

I mean, it would have been so easy to make them do something drastic and turn the fic into a battlefield or something, with the two of them as the main and only heroes who opened the world's eyes to a better tomorrow (?!). But I absolutely LOVED how you wrote them. You implied they were not the only ones aware of things, and true that Kyuhyun lowered the dose of the pills and all, but still it took 60 years for the world to be free...
I don't even know if I'm making sense anymore. I've always prided to be very articulated (at least in my own language), but you just made me speechless, congratulations! XD
Patience is a virtue, they say. And this fic reminds me of two of my favourite quotes:
"For all evils there are two remedies - time and silence."
"All human wisdom is summed up in two words; wait and hope."

Thank you so, so, so MUCH for writting this ^^

[ava_lava]

I think that it is unrealistic to believe that a world can change drastically in just one day. In fact, I think 60 years is already way too fast for such a huge social change to occur (in reality, it should have taken at least 100 years).

I am so glad that you liked this! Like most of my fics, it was a huge challenge to write, especially since I am very uneducated in history and social trends. Much love!