Waters of Freedom

Dec 26, 2010 16:12

Title: Waters of Freedom

Pairing(s): HanChul, slight!KangTeuk

Genre(s): Angst, romance

Length: 2460 words

Rating: PG-13

Summary: Resentment. Anger. Insecurity. Defiance. The four words that describe Heechul’s life in a nutshell. All in Heechul’s POV.

Inspiration(s): I recalled a story I read a long time ago, probably from my English textbook.

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It was the only time that I felt in control of my life, free from physical boundaries and free from the chains of reality. )

pairing: kangteuk, pairing: hanchul

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ink_river10 January 2 2011, 19:52:04 UTC
This is amazing. I just barely realized what the truth was before it was revealed. I don't want to say "poor Heechul" but....poor Hangeng!

This was wonderful, and I am glad you posted it! :)

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ava_lava January 3 2011, 01:13:40 UTC
Thank you so much! The original story was really inspiring, and I just couldn't help but reproduce it HanChul fashion!

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tokkei_12 January 3 2011, 05:55:32 UTC
Oh wow O.o What can I say? This totally blew me away in an extremely good way. I'm pretty sure I've never read the original story, so that's a shame.

Anyways, I really liked all of the characterizations here. Kangteuk as the caring parents is so fitting with Leeteuk being his motherly worrisome self and Kangin being equally concerned yet more reserved. And of course, Han Geng- relatively quiet at first but later so earnestly persistent and loving.

I really wasn't expecting that twist with Heechul, but it makes a lot of sense looking back. His inner strength, pride, and love for Kangteuk are so admirable, and the change in his character at the beginning and end is just wonderful. Of course, the Hanchul interaction with the cellphone number and the kayak lessons made me happy.

Loved this~ ^.^

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ava_lava January 5 2011, 08:10:55 UTC
I would give you the story title of the original plot, but I'm an idiot and can't remember. LOL. Anyways, thank you so much for reading; I loved the idea of a crippled Heechul because it just emphasized his capriciousness.

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followurdestiny January 3 2011, 11:40:17 UTC
touching, lovely written story :) ... of hope and love ^_^

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ava_lava January 5 2011, 08:11:29 UTC
Glad you liked it! Thank you for reading!

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tildesmiley January 10 2011, 16:11:27 UTC
That was incredible <3
To be honest I wasn't expecting HeeChul to be in a wheelchair, but just the fact that he and Geng ended up together was eough to put a big smile on my face <3
I loved it, really.
<3

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ava_lava January 10 2011, 16:56:29 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it.
HanChul will always end up together in my stories, I swear!

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tildesmiley January 27 2011, 14:32:11 UTC
:D And thats how it should be! :D <3

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stars_in_love January 3 2013, 16:53:20 UTC
:') This was oh-so short, but so satisfying and beautiful. For this fic, I have nothing stupid or witty to say. Geng was so cute :D

“Right or left?”

I rolled my eyes. “What do you think, stupid?!”

“Left?”

“NO!”

“Right?”

I'm a sucker for cute things Chul does with Geng :3

Kayaking stuffs with cupcakes and sparkles

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ava_lava January 4 2013, 02:43:44 UTC
Glad you liked it. Underneath it all, I just wanted to write about how physically disabled people have the same potential for happiness and strength as those without disabilities. Some may disagree with me, though.

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