Comments | avada_k: Friends Close, Enemies Closer: Chapter 1

avada_k

Friends Close, Enemies Closer: Chapter 1

Aug 06, 2006 02:22

“You have done well,” hissed the voice from the shadows.

Draco knew that the voice had come from a figure perched atop an elaborate throne, but he could not see it. His master was entirely enshrouded by darkness, so when Draco opened his mouth to speak, he spoke to nothingness.

“Th-thank you, my Lord.” His voice cracked with nervousness. It ( Read more... )

fan fiction, friends close enemies closer

Comments 16

_pinkchocolate August 6 2006, 06:44:28 UTC

YAY finally i'm the first to comment! okay, so i already said that i love this chapter. it's definitely my favourite thing out of everything you've written so far. i LOVE the "He looked like the biggest sodding nancy he had ever seen." part. so much snarkiness...loves it. now hurry up and write the next chapter!

avada_k August 6 2006, 06:56:51 UTC

lmfao... Annie you'll be the ONLY person to respond to this chapter ANYWHERE. I can bet you that no one that I don't already know will review on ff.net, care to put a wager on that?

_pinkchocolate August 6 2006, 06:59:24 UTC

ahahaha. great timing, amy. what's that i spy on your FF.net account under this fic? what? is that a review?

avada_k August 6 2006, 06:59:59 UTC

... and ff.net never ceases to amaze me. A review alert just as I managed to post that comment. *takes it back*

physixxx August 6 2006, 07:28:39 UTC

oooh, i like where this is going.

avada_k August 6 2006, 17:53:42 UTC

Thanks! I hope to have the next chapter up really soon, like today or tomorrow-ish :)

sellthelie August 6 2006, 12:37:02 UTC

I really like this first part, can't wait to read more. Should be good!

:)

avada_k August 6 2006, 17:54:21 UTC

Glad you liked it! I actually can't wait to write more, so you'll be seeing an update soon :)

vivnow August 6 2006, 13:58:15 UTC

Oh, good start! Can't wait for more.

avada_k August 6 2006, 17:55:07 UTC

Thank you! More will be up very very soon (I hope)

nunquamiterum August 6 2006, 13:58:52 UTC

I love it. It's got the perfect balance of plot and flowery language... and occasionally you slip a really good phrase in there, like 'It was the colour of parchment: light, unobtrusive off-white, as if it were afraid to offend anyone by picking a more vibrant color.'

I can't wait to read more.

avada_k August 6 2006, 17:57:44 UTC

Ooooh, that's actually my favorite line. You have good taste :) Thanks for commenting!