Comments | avadedrahetarra: I Won't Be Saved - Die/Shinya - PG15(+)

avadedrahetarra

I Won't Be Saved - Die/Shinya - PG15(+) - OneShot

Nov 09, 2008 02:07

Grey clouds cover the city in a shroud, as if the sky is in mourning. As well it should be, if the lone figure standing in the middle of a darkening cemetery has anything to say about it. Disregarding the now falling snow, he lays a gloved hand on a dark grey stone, the other reaching up to remove a weathered hat from his head. White flakes fall on ( Read more... )

Comments 4

wildxisxturning November 9 2008, 18:14:52 UTC

That was absolutely beautiful. It was nice to see him being so brutally honest instead of railing against Shinya for what he'd done.

Absolutely stunning.

avadedrahetarra November 10 2008, 02:56:42 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^__^

myue November 10 2008, 02:15:45 UTC

Geez,it's a bit scary*shivers*
but so beautiful n deep =)
something that can touch the readers trough their soul! (OMG what's imma talkin about*knocks head)
i like your wrirng style,btw!
good job!^^

avadedrahetarra November 10 2008, 02:58:17 UTC

Hee hee. I think I understand what you mean. :)

And thank you! It's taken years to develop. ^_^