Dude, if I was Aiden, I wouldn't be sleeping well for at least a month because of trying to keep one eye open. Like seeing that Aaron is standing with them and not letting them be alone anymore. :)
No glaring errors that interrupted my reading, so if there are mistakes, I didn't catch them. :D
Aiden wouldn't see Dawn coming and even with Buffy's warning there's a good chance she'll still exact her revenge. He had her believing her sister was dead. That's not easily forgiven.
Aaron watches/studies people to make sure they're good before bringing them to Alexandria. So he was already attached to the girls before he even approached them... which I suppose I should address at some point. ;) Perhaps in the next scene I think this short needs.
Wel knowing Dawn. Aiden will end up bald or a smurf(bleu) or he loses something he fond of etc. Knowing Dawn she will think of something. Oh not to hurt him but otherwise he will get it.
He left her sister to die and told Dawn Buffy did die how stupid can you be. Not only a coward but also stupid.
This Dawn would hurt him. Aiden would wake up on fire or something equally terrible. He left her sister to die and that's not something she forgives.
Aiden and Nicholas left a lot of people to die in the series. The entire population of Alexandria is filled with cowards at this point. Aaron is the bravest which is part of the reason why the girls are more inclined to live with him and Eric.
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No glaring errors that interrupted my reading, so if there are mistakes, I didn't catch them. :D
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Aaron watches/studies people to make sure they're good before bringing them to Alexandria. So he was already attached to the girls before he even approached them... which I suppose I should address at some point. ;) Perhaps in the next scene I think this short needs.
Thank you!
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He left her sister to die and told Dawn Buffy did die how stupid can you be. Not only a coward but also stupid.
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Aiden and Nicholas left a lot of people to die in the series. The entire population of Alexandria is filled with cowards at this point. Aaron is the bravest which is part of the reason why the girls are more inclined to live with him and Eric.
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