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[avanicole]

You gain your power upon my falling tear

And I feel your empty feelings crush my soul

My head against your palm

Admits whose giving and takes

And undresses me to the skin

I guess I could destroy the world for you

To show you that my love cannot be depicted

Your wish is my command

And your command is my wish

The slap upon my cheek keeps me awake

And the grip

Comments

[ammeeria]

You know. I think you should write more. I think that is very beautiful! You have a talent! :)
Great work, keep up!

[avanicole]

Thanks dearest, but I hate my poems, and I seldom come up with something. The poem above just slipped out when I wrote. Probably won't happen again. :P

[ammeeria]

Oh no! I'd love to read more of your work!

[avanicole]

Haha, well I promise you that I will let you see it if I come up with something new! ;)