PROMPT 65: Air "Wrong" by chordatesrock K

Nov 28, 2012 18:06

Title: Wrong
Author: chordatesrock
Rating: K (or G)
Words: 464
Genre: AU
Char/Pair: Zuko and Aang (not Zuko/Aang)
Warning: AU, can't think of anything else
Summary: Aang is an exiled Fire Nation prince; Zuko wakes up after a hundred years in an iceberg.

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prompt 65: air, author: chordatesrock, rating: k

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wolfs_lament November 30 2012, 05:20:57 UTC
Sorry I don't understand dreamwidth, so I'll just comment here:

This is a really great start to an interesting concept. I like that Zuko's seriousness and Aang's playfulness come out in such small scenes. I'm curious as to how Zuko ended up in the South Pole when it sounds like he didn't run away.

I also like that Aang is still wanting to find the Avatar (and I assume capture him as well). I would definitely be interested if you continued this.

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chordatesrock November 30 2012, 06:14:36 UTC
Wrong can also be found here on my LiveJournal. All of my fics can be found on my LiveJournal; my Dreamwidth is a backup of a few of my most important fics and mainly used for interacting with people on Dreamwidth communities.

Thank you. Zuko was on the way to his new home when disaster struck (either the same storm as in canon or the Fire Nation). He and Appa barely escaped and ended up almost drowning, as canon.

If I participate in this challenge again, I will probably continue with this universe.

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clockwerkchaos December 2 2012, 06:50:31 UTC
You know, I saw an fanfic thread with this premise which always looked neat. Interesting to see someone actually writing it*, only thing that makes me sad is this isn't far enough along to really see the difference between your vision and the on sketched out there.

link: http://plus4chan.org/b/a/res/91228.html#96134

*Well actually Reconstructed Destinies by DJNS did already, but that really wasn't very good. So another take is welcome.

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chordatesrock December 2 2012, 07:18:17 UTC
Attackfish: hey, there's a comment here that got marked as spam even though it's not!

Luckily,

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c3childs December 3 2012, 18:40:20 UTC
I'm sure Iroh and the crew appreciate the differences so much. Aang is likely much more enthusiastic about music night and Iroh's shopping trips.
What would Sokka call Prince Aang, since he obviously isn't a Jerk? He'd likely find all of his good cheer Ty Lee level disturbing.

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chordatesrock December 3 2012, 20:26:59 UTC
Yeah, Aang is much more enthusiastic. The instant I thought of this universe, I started picturing that scene with the tsungi horn and how differently Aang would react. At the very least, it prevents that one almost!mutiny, though I'm not sure it changes the crew's behavior that much in the end.

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