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Fan Fic For Your Critique

Feb 26, 2008 11:55

Author: jill_rg
Title: Down to the Wire
Rating: K
Pairing: Sokka/Yue
Word Count: 1,086
Summary: Sokka and Chief Arnook have a discussion that answers my question, What inspired Sokka to turn to who he turned to in Bitter Work?
Notes: Takes Place after the Season 1 Finale and then during Bitter Work; heavily spiritual; written before the announcement ( Read more... )

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kittypryde87 February 26 2008, 22:24:46 UTC

This is well-written, but I kind of have an issue with you bending the rules of the world. There is no Western side of the Avatar world. There are just the four nations. I also feel like I've been preached at, that you take issue with the mythos of the Avatar universe, and are trying to bend the rules. Just my personal opinion.

jill_rg February 26 2008, 22:37:24 UTC

Oh, wow. Well, I don't, but I did feel sorry for Yue, like she got a bad deal.

kaibasgirl February 27 2008, 02:11:06 UTC

would it be too much trouble to ask you to post your story with the correct format? It's in the profile.

Thank you ^_^

jill_rg February 27 2008, 02:48:15 UTC

Sorry. Done. But for some reason, whenever I try to make my username a "LJ username," it messes up the entire entry (everything bolded, no line spaces, some code visible...).

kaibasgirl February 27 2008, 03:15:36 UTC

wow, that's really strange...don't know why that's happening.

thank you for using the format though, as best as you could ^^