Purple Prose on the First Try?

[avatar_sues]

Today's sue is again just one chapter long. I was going to bring you an extra airbender, but as I read it, it started to gain my respect. Very decent writing, almost plausible explanation. I'll leave it... for now.

But today I bring you a girl trapped in a diamond prison in a volcano. There's purple prose and... very.... stiff writing. it would be

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[katsura_shinju]

There are two of you guys now.

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