Mirror the Sun

Jan 09, 2012 19:32


Author: Amy Raine

Title: Mirror the Sun, Prologue and Part 1

Rating: PG-13

Pairings: slight one-sided Azula/Sokka, other pairings in the background are canon.

Summary: When the moon spirit intrudes on Azula's hallucinations to show her the truth, she agrees to a bargain that will get her out of the asylum. Unfortunately, she doesn't realize the full ( Read more... )

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ljlee February 1 2012, 01:57:36 UTC
Ah, I have found it! First I want to start off by saying the rewrites worked to amazing effect. The prologue scene that I already liked is now hauntingly beautiful, and the pace became considerably tighter now that you've deleted the in-between scenes and kept Azula's point of view. You use the amnesiac's point of view well, and the descriptions through the eyes of someone unfamiliar with the world brings everything to life. The supernatural setup is both enchanting and creepy the way it should be, and I love how you utilized the traditional association of moon with madness ( ... )

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