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Can I just awkwardly say, though, is the way that Thor treats the bully? They're middle schoolers, so he doesn't attack her, just warns her; he treats her like a child who needs to be taught a valid life lesson, and he treats the bullied girl as if she were just any other child, and is kind.
IDK if I'm even making sense, but I like the way that you characterized all of the children, even the bully. Go you!
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I get what you mean, and thank you! Yeah, he was going to bring down the fucking wrath, but then the scene started playing out with middle school kids and I realized that he'd be mostly disappointed.
And he would be *such* a hypocrite if he acted like he had never done anything prickish! XD
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And he would, wouldn't he? Though, I wouldn't mind seeing him bring down the wrath of the heavens on an adult... It just seems wrong for him to do so to a child.
Also a good point! <3
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You can't say, 'pick on someone your own size' and then dropkick someone less than half your size. XD
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I love your characterization of the children and Thor. How he gives her the reprimand that the bully needs but also the advice and the gift at the end.
The brother who's protective of his little sister.
Plus of course letting the other touch Mjölnir. I would wear that bracelet with Pride also.
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I do approve mightly. I think it's just right. This fill made me happy, but the last line on your AO3 made me squee. Thank you very much
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I wish Thor had been there to reprimand my bullies!
I love this. Great, great job, author <3
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Aaaaw. *hugs* I'm honored this rings true for you.
I think that society really fails to appreciate the guts it takes to interact with the world at large when you don't do it like everyone else, and that Thor has been well-trained to recognize courage.
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Really, thank you. I mean it sincerely <3
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All the hearts. All the hearts ever.
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