Never a Bride (working title, Thorki arranged marriage AU) Chapter 1

[ladymizra]

So I'm working on a Thorki fic, and I decided to put my first chapter up on Livejournal to get some feedback. Mind you, its unbetaed, and will likely be edited in the future. But, if you like it, tell me what you think! If you don't like it, tell me how it can be improved

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