'Seasons' (still a temporary title) page 1 - pencils.

[aviv_really]

Comments

[ext_913358]

Something's very old-school manga about this. In a very good way.
I don't like that the line's width varies in the last three panels.

[aviv_really]

The line's width gets larger because I enlarged the previous panel and reworked it each time. It's quicker to work this way. These are just pencils, keep that in mind. I don't care how it looks as long as all the lines I need are there for the inking stage.