Traitors Chapter Four: Part Three

[avlyn_naturae]

Title: Traitors Chapter Four (Part Three)

Fandom: Star Wars

Pairing: Anakin/Obi-Wan (with hints of Anakin/Padme)

Rating: Generally R/NC-16 (for violence, deaths, future sex, language...)

Summary: Following the events of Skywalker's transformation into Darth Vader, a hint of Darth Sidious' plans are revealed. At the brink of a new era, assumptions

Comments

[hlglne]

Happy birthday! it's coming out great!

[avlyn_naturae]

Thanks! Hope you have a good 2006!

[ariespureblood]

wow the feelings anakin are getting are scaring me- that's a good sign. I really love where this fic is going. A great fic on an equally great authors birthday! Happy birthday, and Happy holidays! (and where was obi-wan bleeding again i'm sorry, i need gudiance on that lol)

[avlyn_naturae]

I'm glad Anakin's character got in the right response. Thanks for the birthday greetings. Oh, and Anakin's only imagining Obi-Wan's bleeding but there's gonna be blood really soon.

[ariespureblood]

why haven't you updated yet??!!! Please I can't live like this!! I love your fic! <3

[avlyn_naturae]

I just updated for chapter five a few days ago. You can look in my memories to find chapter five.

[scary_lullabies]

BREATHTAKING! No really, I felt like I couldn't breath, especially during this last part. Fantastic story. Rock on, you.

[avlyn_naturae]

Thank you, and please breathe...I don't want to be responsible for anyone dying form loss of breath. ;)

[culuyetille]

this chapter was most certainly worth the wait. Marvellous!!! Palpatine's scheming is portrayed so minuciously, it's fantastic. I do love your ponderings on the Jedi way via Rogers ;] and Anakin and Obi-Wan's slow descent into the Dark Side couldn't be more artful, achingly beautiful.

*fangirls*

[avlyn_naturae]

Thank you. Obi-Wan's and Anakin's relationship will start heating up. For the rest of the Jedi...hmm...I was just thinking of doing away with them entirely...well...still thinking abt it.