FPS: Traitors Chapter Five Part Three

[avlyn_naturae]

Title: Traitors Chapter Five (Part Three)

Fandom: Star Wars

Pairing/s: Anakin/Obi-Wan with hints of Anakin/Padme and possibly other pairings

Rating: R/NC-16 (for the whole story)

Summary: In a universe witnessing the imminent rise of Palpatine's power, hope struggles to survive in the bleakest of times. If all hope lies with a single pair already

Comments

[ariespureblood]

OHHH OBI-WAN'S BEARD IS GONE!! ALLELUJEYAH!! *i think that's how you spell it, Anywaysss* Yes, that was a BIG plus! I love where your taking this. It's beyond words. I know you can't update that fast anymore, but I just want you to know this is practically my favorite fic. I love the sexual tension. And Anakin's main focus on Obi-wan. Is it really that bad? Of course it is! *you can never have enough obi-wan ;)* Just keep possting plzzz! Asap. I need it that badly ^_^!

[anonymous]

Please update soon. I love this story. Very sad about Padme though. She shouldn't have had to see her husband kissing someone else.

Loved it!

[anonymous]

Loved this story. Anakin and Obi-wan's relationship and its progression was very natural and subtle. I can't wait to see how it goes.

[pomer1]

I enjoyed your story; felt very bad for Padme.

When will you update?

[sandystarr88]

Wow, what a way to end a chapter. I feel so bad for Anakin, he's hurting so much. I hope you update this soon, it's really good!

~Sandy