Beta help?

[avon]

Hi all -

I am working on an original story and I was wondering if anyone would be willing to give it a read and give me some feedback. Here is a summary:

Maria and Moesha Li, identical twins in their mid-twenties, live in the Boston area. Maria’s boyfriend, Jose, is an engineering student in college and he winds up doing research in a lab that

Comments

[cruisedirector]

I'd be happy to read it!

[avon]

Oooh thank you! I shared a google doc with you. I welcome any sort of feedback - from SPAG to characterization to clarity of text to whatever else you come up with

[lousy_science]

I can give it a look over, but won't be for a few days - message me if you like.

[avon]

Will do! thank you!