Comments | aw_man: haiku

aw_man

haiku

Oct 26, 2005 22:16

Comments 5

that's not a real haiku! hotweiner October 27 2005, 19:46:37 UTC

the syllables go 5-7-5, but that one has 8 in the 2nd line.

Re: that's not a real haiku! aw_man October 28 2005, 02:31:34 UTC

good observation.

I liked these horseplaylawyer October 27 2005, 23:00:34 UTC

Re: I liked these aw_man October 28 2005, 02:32:31 UTC

the first one is funny and the last one reminds me of the canal where we used the gravity bong that one time.

Re: I liked these aw_man October 28 2005, 02:35:40 UTC

by the way, it only reminds me of that day because that day WASN'T the fuckin doldrums.
here is a perfect haiku from my journal

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and this one is funny