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Apr 23, 2007 13:04

Anatomy (Part 2 of 2)
Panic! At The Disco; Brendon Urie/Jon Walker, Ryan Ross/Spencer Smith
R; For the wtf27 challenge prompt number 6: mpreg. Yeah, you read it. Herein lies one pregnant boy, one completely fictional affliction, and a lot of crack. For lady_stargazer, who did it first, but told me it was okay to do it too. The Ryan/Spencer is for her. Beta by the ( Read more... )

bandslash, wtf27, panic! at the disco

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foxtrot_pasta April 23 2007, 19:48:03 UTC
This is a very interesting story, I think most mpreg stories don't really take into account that it could be too big a shock for the "mother" for him to feel that a baby is a cool thing to have (though to be honest I don't really read all THAT much mpreg). I think it'd have been even cooler if Brendon had actually gone through with the adoption, I've never read a story where a boy gets pregnant and then doesn't keep the baby.

But this was a nice read, thanks :)

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thewayout April 23 2007, 19:51:16 UTC
I just couldn't make him go through with the adoption because I wanted too much for Brendon to have to raise a kid just as obnoxious as he was. Maybe somewhere there's an alternate ending where he gives it up, but I don't know.

Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

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thewayout April 23 2007, 21:16:19 UTC
you should definitely read lady_stargazer's mpreg, then. Hers is vastly better than mine.

but thank you. i'm glad that you liked it.

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thewayout April 23 2007, 21:23:11 UTC
I never did either! In fact, I'm pretty sure that lady_stargazer's was my very first. Without her meta discussion of it, I never would have written mine.

Thank you. I just couldn't imagine a boy genuinely wanting to have a baby in that sort of situation. Part of me wanted to have Brendon go through with giving up the baby, but in the end, I wanted him to actually have to raise it, too. I hope male pregnancy is impossible, because yikes.

Aww, thank you so much.

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offonmars April 23 2007, 20:43:23 UTC
This was great! I think you captured the doubts of new parents very well (especially the ones of two boys! heh) and handled the improbability of mpreg with great dialogue and fun(ny) situations. :)

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thewayout April 23 2007, 21:26:37 UTC
thank you! i was worried about whether it was overdramatic and all sorts of those things. i'm glad you enjoyed it!

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thewayout April 23 2007, 21:45:18 UTC
:D I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I'm even glad... er that it exceeded expectations! ♥ I'll get right on that bodyswap for you now. LMAO.

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thewayout April 24 2007, 00:50:44 UTC
ughhhh. notice that i didn't actually like, open it to work on it or anything. i'm watching dancing with the stars, and all things considered, don't really feel like writing.

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