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May 29, 2007 22:48

Perfectly After All
Panic! At The Disco; Ryan/Brendon
NC-17; The renfaire AU. Thank you for indulging me in this. You’re all sweethearts. For _lolapalooza before she leaves for Italy. Also for tragedy, jzbell and lady_stargazer. Beta by the lovely yankeesdtr. I love you all to tiny pieces.

Sometimes Ryan wishes that he’d taken up smoking. Then he considers that even the tiniest bit of fire is uncalled for when it’s already eighty degrees at 8 o’clock in the morning and you’re wearing at least five layers of clothes. )

bandslash, panic! at the disco

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siren_mage May 30 2007, 09:23:40 UTC
Oh holy hell. This made my night SO MUCH BETTER. Just. Yes. The characterization was so great to me and the girlfriend inclusion made me happy but more than that, Ryan/Brendon, man! You did such a gorgeous job with them here and they were so OTP and I just. I may have cried. >.>

Awesome job. Thanks so much for this! <3<3<3

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thewayout May 30 2007, 15:41:32 UTC
yay! i'm glad that i could do that. i know stuff is kind of ew right now. and thank you thank you. i didn't mean to make you cry.

you're welcome! ♥

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heartscientist May 30 2007, 09:26:54 UTC
JULIE WINS EVERYTHING.

God, I know I say this every time, but your Spencer is my faaaavourite, no matter what the hell he's doing. His dialogue is so fucking RIGHT it like, smacks the reader between the eyes (because Spencer is so SNIPPY, eee). "Get the hell out of my car." Also shut your stupid adorable FACE, Spencer Smith, with not caring about hauling his own drum around and being so stupid for Haley !!

Also, your character judgements are just right - business for Spencer! Complete confusion for Ryan!

Spencer’s pretty sure that the first time he ever saw Jon, he was charging through the streets with Ryan Ross slung over his shoulder. That is just. Such a perfect sentence. And I love Spencer wanting to be around if Ryan's going to get a dunking >D ( ... )

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thewayout May 30 2007, 15:47:47 UTC
i worried about him not being 'spencer' enough in this one because i didn't have a real chance tow ork it out because he doesn't really have that much DIALOGUE, you know? but i'm glad that it all worked out and he's good.

theatre for brendon? lmao. but yes, thank you. ♥

i'd want to be around if ryan was going to get a dunking!

patrick just kind of showed up and said, hi, i'm going to be in this. and i said, "okay!" and wrote him in. :D

Katie Kay can totally be a bellydancer!

oh honey, i didn't mean to make you cry! :( but you like the brendon/ryan so. :D:D:D

thank you my dear! ♥♥♥

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heartscientist May 30 2007, 15:51:06 UTC
Ahahaha I managed to totally miss the bit about Brendon! Later when I read about his theatre degree, I was like, huh!

*headdesk* Yeeeeah. Mr Urie, I was not snubbing you!

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thewayout May 30 2007, 15:57:25 UTC
lmao, i don't think it was mentioned exactly until that later on part. but yeah. that's what he was going to school for. i'm weird, i don't know. that just seemed very brendon to me, and i could definitely see that being something that the parents are like, ":/" and don't care if he finishes or not.

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softlyforgotten May 30 2007, 12:41:22 UTC
Gargh this fic made me cry and laugh and grin stupidly throughout the whole thing. It's amazing; beautiful and warm and so full of heart. ♥ *adds to mems*

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thewayout May 30 2007, 15:50:36 UTC
aww, thank you! i'm glad that you enjoyed it!

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rock_my_town May 30 2007, 14:21:06 UTC
Oh god, this is just amazing all around. I love these boys like this SO MUCH! It's so adorable and dory. I love Spencer and Jon, and I love that you wrote in Hayley and Cassie, and I love Ryan because he is so heartbroken and it took him so long to say 'I love you', and I loooove Brendon sosososo much because he is in the middle of becoming who he is by himself, without parents and religion.

*FLAIL* SO GREAT EVERYWHERE. It made me cry a bit, too...which is always nice for me.

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thewayout May 30 2007, 15:55:28 UTC
aww, thank you so much! i'm glad that you liked it!

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prettykitty_aya May 30 2007, 15:00:23 UTC
okay.

i am now haplessly, hopelessly happy.

jon's bonecrushing hugs, spencer wanting to cry for ryan, omg ryan and brendon aren't something i normally read, but oh man, this was heartwrenchingly wonderful and perfect and a thousand other words i can't think of right now.

thank you.

*wanders off in a happy daze*

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thewayout May 30 2007, 15:57:49 UTC
aww yay, i'm glad that you are. :) and i'm glad that you gave it a chance even though you aren't normally into brendon/ryan.

so thank you. ♥

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