fun with the rhyming dictionary.

Jul 23, 2005 22:52

comments please. even if this sucks a lot. i just tried something. i dont know what it is... its not finished i dont think. i just want to know if it sounds stupid. thank you much ( Read more... )

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runchelsrun July 24 2005, 03:33:43 UTC
my favorite word in the whole poem is giraffe. how many other words rhyme with laugh? but all that aside, i think the poem has a lot of potential. it is very light and breezy, and that is good when you are referring to things that sometimes cause you to hurt inside a lot.

annie, it's been fun talking to you this summer. perhaps we will be able to hang out in person once we get back to school. three weeks!

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xlaurasaurusx July 24 2005, 19:55:49 UTC
haha yeah i like how you mentioned giraffes.

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awinner July 24 2005, 20:32:57 UTC
yeah that giraffe part is really ridic. the whole thing is really ridic. i dont know what possessed me to share it with the world. oh well. at least you two enjoyed it to some extent. haha.

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