Nursery fic - Vaz Te/Noble (Torres/Mata)

Oct 28, 2012 13:15

The one where Torres and Mata open a nursery ao3
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Everyone is looking for a home of sorts. Ft. various footballers and their babies, including numerous West Ham players. They have really cute baby names, I apologise for nothing.

This is for the_wild_son: thanks for letting me ship your team babe ♥ ladytelemachus and heartequals thanks for the betas ♥ ETA: I totally totally ( Read more... )

football: torres/mata, type: au, football: vaz te/noble

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trainmad October 28 2012, 22:18:18 UTC
Aww, this is so adorable! Yay for all the cute kiddies and the parents too!

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awkward_sorta January 4 2013, 12:57:59 UTC
Sorry for the late reply, thank you for commenting!

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the_wild_son October 28 2012, 22:19:11 UTC
AHHHHHHHHHHH ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh \o/ \o/ \o/

I'm going to c/p this to read at work tomorrow and then I will come back and QUOTE IT ALLLL back to you and be like :D :D :D

Okay cool I love you so much you're ridiculous and amazing <3 <3 <3

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the_wild_son October 29 2012, 21:49:59 UTC
Sooooo, I read this twice again today at work ahhh this is how delighted it makes me.

I love how it's so amazingly indulgent from the very start:

and they like especially the stories of the man with 1940s hair who always comes in before the match on a Saturday.

Ahhhhh! SSP <3 <3

I love the way you write, I really do. I know I say it every time you write something but it's true. All the little details, all the particulars that make me feel so calm and comforted. Like them drinking lemonade and the cool evening air and the busy East London street.

They get the bus back to Barking Road together, and when Ricardo puts his key in the lock, opens the door that leads to the stairs to his flat, he is smiling. It feels good to say goodbye to someone in the area, to walk the twenty yards to his front door. To feel like a local.

This is loooooooovley ♥

"Don’t do the business talk, come on. She’s called Honey.”ahhhh ahahah pretty much what happened with us when we realised her name ( ... )

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zoect2 October 29 2012, 00:04:06 UTC
Oh wow, this is a-m-a-z-i-n-g!!!

(Juan smiles, despite himself. “You’re a terrible business partner,” he says, and Fernando puts his plate to one side. “Yes,” he says, kissing Juan’s shoulder, “But I’m pretty,” he kisses Juan again, “And you love me.”

“And you gave our children tall genes,” Juan says, and Fernando smiles.)

I love that part especially. It's such a sweet insight into their relationship and ooh it just makes me feel all warm and squishy inside. As do all the kiddies; yay at Nora being the bossy little madam. <3

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komnene October 29 2012, 04:56:01 UTC
(Hellooo. Is this a good time to start leaving comments on things? Am I doing this right? Help!)

This is sooo cute and lovely. I love kids but I haate bad kid!fic - I do love kid!fic done right, which is hard to find. You've done it right! I like how you've done the kids well even though they're on the periphery - naughty Shaqueel made me lol. It makes me miss my old job!

And the Mata/Torres stuff is so nicely done and domestic. And even though pretty much all I know about Vaz Te is his smile I imagine him to be a great babysitter. There's just lots of lovely little things going on, David and Stevie and the Alcantaras :)

Now if you'll excuse me, I'm about to spend half an hour cooing over all the Spain babies pics I reblogged from the Euros.

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the_wild_son October 29 2012, 12:25:35 UTC
Hi! I'm Lorna, let's be lj friends!

If all you know about Vaz Te is his smile of JOY and SUNSHINE then that's fine. To be honest, aside from his beautiful goal scoring ability, we don't know much about him. But with a smile like that I think it's certainly fair to assume he'd be a great nursery worker :)

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awkward_sorta October 29 2012, 17:29:24 UTC
I really did base this fic off NOTHING didn't I. "Mark Noble has a daughter called Honey! ............. vaz te!!!!!! ...........................daddies!!!!!!!!!!!!! brb fic."

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komnene October 31 2012, 03:41:26 UTC
Nice to meet you Lorna! :P (Quite sure I follow you on Tumblr haha) I still have very little idea of what I'm doing with LJ, but if you're willing to put up with that, sure :P
I feel like his smile is the most important thing you need to know about Vaz Te anyway. I smile like that indicates a whole personality.

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justkisa October 29 2012, 12:53:52 UTC
this is darling and adorable and it gave the warmest, fuzziest feelings inside, really really amazing! Juan and Fernando are delightfully domestic. I really enjoyed Vaz Te and Noble together just the right amount of hesitancy and awkwardness and a tiny bit of angst (and Honey was awesomely adorable with her football love - and I loved, loved the image of Nora fixing her pigtails!) I smiled through the whole story!

(also those pictures at the beginning = me cooing and sighing and basically melting into a puddle of goo)

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