Comments | awkward_sorta: Soulpatch Wishes - football fic

awkward_sorta

Soulpatch Wishes - football fic - Spain/Barca crackfic

Aug 01, 2011 21:54

Soulpatch Wishes
Silva/Villa and/or Cesc/Pique if you want *is-it-gen-or-isn't-it jazz hands*. Very, very PG.
~2800 words
Set in a sort of vague indiscriminate time period in 2010, taking in various international breaks? Whatever. It's about magical facial hair, don't bring me down with canon.

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football: villa/silva, type: crack!fic, type: gen

Comments 24

elizaberglund August 18 2011, 12:31:16 UTC

hahahahahahahahahahaha this is just hillarious! I love it1 Honestly briliant crack!

awkward_sorta August 21 2011, 18:56:34 UTC

thank you! i'm really glad you enjoyed it!

acchikocchi August 18 2011, 16:52:14 UTC

ksdadfldaklffjk;saffkjsafksfjaljadkfjslkafsklfdkalsalkflk;jadksad <-- MY VERY ELOQUENT FEELINGS

acchikocchi August 19 2011, 04:02:58 UTC

I was in a hurry to get out the door this morning and just wanted to leave a comment before I did, but I'm afraid I'm back to elaborate, ahaha. I really like the way you set up the structure, the implicit comparison of two similar situations, and how Villa reacts to that. (And can I just say that Cesc's "crushingly happy" expression softened a heart I did not think would be softening any time soon, ahem.) But primarily, in a shocking turn of events (ha), I clicked for the Villa-Silva interaction and you totally delivered, oh man. That's a great dynamic you gave them, my favorite detail being:

When David was suspicious of how quiet Silva was, when they both thought the other didn't like them very much.

This TOTALLY pings me right. As does the delicate balance between being happy and missing someone, or something.

Oh, David thinks, and gets kind of hot around the collar.

...okay, and I also liked this, ahem. That whole scene, actually. That is to say, re: your pairing disclaimer, YES I DO WANT THANKS, feel free at any time to write ( ... )

acchikocchi August 19 2011, 04:03:58 UTC

oh my god I think this comment is half the length of your fic. what is wrong with me.

awkward_sorta August 19 2011, 10:34:25 UTC

You are the loveliest <3 thank you so much for giving some thought to a fic about magical facial hair, oh my god. It's really appreciated, yeah, thanks. I thought people might just chuck me out of the fandom for this, haha.

Also I was really cautious about writing Villa/Silva, because I really haven't got the hang of them yet, so it means a lot that you of all people approved.

the_wild_son August 18 2011, 17:56:27 UTC

Oh god Ella, you know how I feel about this. It's so silly and ridiculous but overwhelmingly adorable too.

Cesc wanting a doughnut will NEVER not kill me. And Pique's 2nd wish, oh gosh. Wait, Pique's first wish - laughing forever.

And Ramos. And everything.

ELLA, a magic soul patch. You wrote this and it is beautiful and I love you.

heartequals August 18 2011, 18:02:21 UTC

PEP AND MESSI

ADORABLE
FOR
EVER

ugh this is cute and hilarious but I already told you that.

slyreflection August 18 2011, 19:40:26 UTC

this is glorious. i had no idea what in the world this could possibly be BUT IT IS GLORIOUS. love love love it ugh the wishes; hilarious crackfic but with ~feelings~ and villa's voice is spot on.

awkward_sorta August 21 2011, 18:57:32 UTC

i had no idea what in the world this could possibly be

haha, yes, well, that was my feeling the entire time I was writing it :P I'm really glad you enjoyed it though and thank you for saying I got Villa's voice right <3