the health giving properties of lemonade - football fic - iker/david

Jan 24, 2012 19:49

the health giving properties of lemonade
Iker Muniain/David de Gea
~1900, PG

This is for distira still because of all the reasons, but comes with a lot of thanks to the_wild_son for indulging my rojita soft spot ♥

“You know you’re not supposed to pick someone to spend the rest of your life with based on their football skills ( Read more... )

football: iker muniain/david de gea

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justkisa January 24 2012, 21:28:31 UTC
this is adorable! i love the way you portray their relationship - there's such a great sense of familiarity and fun. this -

“I’m interested in you officially,” he says, and Iker snorts. “I’d like that in writing,” he says, and David toys with the idea of putting it on a postcard.

- in particular made me laugh and smile and generally go awww!!!

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awkward_sorta January 25 2012, 21:38:47 UTC
Hee, thank you for letting me know, I'm glad I could give you a smile!

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distira January 25 2012, 03:17:01 UTC
because he also knows that Iker doesn’t really want any lemonade, he just wants to be talking.

omg typical iker SPOT ON CHARACTERIZATION also how david knows him well enough to know that he's just talking to talk, love.

he kind of enjoys Iker when he gets a bit petulant.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

He sits on the bed next to Iker and Iker watches him. “I’m paying you attention now,” David says, and Iker sits up and kisses him.

They fall down in the gap between the pillows and hold onto each others’ t-shirts. David feels the lazy satisfaction of a quiet afternoon. Iker is half on top of them and he’s keeping David warm all down one side.

boys making out yesssss best ever. i love it. i absolutely adore it.

“He has a good name anyway.”

David smiles at his phone. “Yeah,” he says. “That’s why I picked him.”
how adorable can they beeeee seriously. and david smiling at his phone! la;djksfa;lksdjf ( ... )

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awkward_sorta January 25 2012, 21:42:21 UTC
(Hi! This was secretly a DON'T GIVE UP ON FANDOM OKAY present!)

Your comment is lovely and I welcome aaall the keysmashing and quoting. The more I write Iker the more I like writing him and it makes me happy that you see him in the same way.

I don't really want him to leave because I know what it's like to have homegrown players abandon you but on the other hand I would be gleefacing ALL THE TIME if I got him in the EPL for a while. But yes, I really can't see Sir Alex spending on wingers - it seems much more likely that if he'd come anywhere he'd be drafted in at Chelsea as a potential counterpart to Mata. Boooo, don't want him at Chelsea.

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weekendoffender January 25 2012, 04:10:10 UTC
Oh god, this is wonderfully adorable!

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awkward_sorta January 25 2012, 21:42:50 UTC
:D thank you very much!

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freakmejc128 January 25 2012, 05:15:02 UTC
Awwww, I love these two together so much and you did an awesome job with them. They're so natural and relaxed, and completely adorable.

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awkward_sorta January 25 2012, 21:44:03 UTC
I'm so pleased when someone else enjoys these two. They make so much sense to me but I understand that Iker can also be paired with, oh, anyone, so I am kind of constructing my own little Iker/David corner of the internet. Anyway thank you for your comments, they made me smile :)

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freakmejc128 January 26 2012, 00:03:36 UTC
I ship Iker/Everyone too but would gladly set up camp in this little Iker/David corner.

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the_wild_son January 25 2012, 20:30:21 UTC
Heheh I'm still ridiculously entertained that you took a couple of silly 15 word fics and took them to this really adorable place.

I love your fade to black porn \o/

"“Yes I do,” Iker says, and takes a breath. “So,” he starts, and David allows himself a little smile. “So, I was reading on the internet right, apparently it prevents kidney failure or whatever.”

“Kidney failure.”

“Yeah, or whatever.” Iker rolls the ball down his leg to his knee and accidentally flips it into his face. David doesn’t see, but,

“Are you glad I didn’t see that?”

“Mildly,” Iker says, and carries on. “People go on lemonade diets.”"

Heheheh. Oh, Ella. You and your u21s <3

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awkward_sorta January 25 2012, 21:44:53 UTC
Hehehe. THANK YOU FOR THE 15 WORD FICS YOU'RE SO INDULGENT/THEY'RE SO SNEAKY.

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