One Headlight [companion to Bright Eyes, an OnBer songfic]

May 22, 2010 22:41

Title: One Headlight [A Onew/Amber Songfic] companion piece to Bright Eyes [JongLuna] but can be read separately/out of order.
Pairing: Onew(Shinee)/Amber(f(x)), Jonghyun/Luna
Rating: NC-17 for mentions of violence, drug use, and semi-explicit sex.
Summary: The story of how the members of Shinee and F(x) grew as friends in a very bad of the city, ( Read more... )

pairing: onber, rating: nc-17, fanfiction: shining effects

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awkwardnormalcy May 23 2010, 07:18:46 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you still like this, thank you for commenting again ^^

I will, I'm not sure who I'll write about next, but I'm getting awfully comfy in tis little universe I created so I'll be writing in it for a bit methinks~

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wintersol May 23 2010, 08:17:43 UTC
Sidestory!
I love when authors write out what happens/happened to other characters in fic.
This was just as nice as the other part, and I like the pairing. Also, I just watched the f(x) episode where Amber said she likes modest guys. Guess who's modest...
Good job once again!

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awkwardnormalcy May 23 2010, 16:12:24 UTC
:3 Onber is real kinda sorta, ish possible if you tilt your head tothe side and squint your eyes! XD

Thank you! There may be more sidestories on the others >.> not sure what pairing I'll go with next though...

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xkeirafanx May 23 2010, 13:02:43 UTC
*eyes watering at the last lines*
wow, you really know how to create this atmosphere (can't explain)

I like how Onew is still hoping for and believing in the good things. And that he is open about what he feels. While Amber is slightly in denial, but in the end knows what she actually feels.

Beautiful written, I'm really addicted to your writing.

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awkwardnormalcy May 23 2010, 16:15:00 UTC
Thanks! Thats what I was going for,a sentimental, eyewatering feeling <3

Aw, thanks bb, that means a lot from an author who I'm aso a fan of, like you~

...I should upload some of the f(x) icons I made XD

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dubukaichan May 23 2010, 20:02:19 UTC
Too good for words. :|

I usually 'not like' reading angst, especially when I'm in not in the mood to feel down. But this one's epic. :D You almost had me to tears when Jonghyun was on the phone, story-telling about the members' pasts. (Nooo, Taemin as a drug-user!)

Whoa. Onew-Amber. Such an unexpected pairing. I never really thought of them to have more than a sunbae-hoobae relationship. But, it's good trying out something new, too. :)

Beautiful. :) Well-written. :D

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awkwardnormalcy May 23 2010, 23:06:58 UTC
Is that bad? D:

I'm the same way, I usually like things wth a good mix, so I tried to hit that same point, thank you for giving it a try even though it isn't your usual fare ^^

Thank you, I was quite worried about that part because of what he's talking about, it was supposed to affect you!

Its definitely fun to try new things and see all we can make seem possible :)

Thank you again bb, I appreciate you commenting!

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dubukaichan May 24 2010, 11:51:10 UTC
No, it isn't bad. :D It's actually the other way around, it's very GOOD! 8D

Maybe you'll be the first one to change my views about angst fics. (: =D

Yeah, and it DID affect my emotional state big time. XD

Now I think I'm liking this pairing a lot. :D

<3

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skytears9 May 28 2010, 06:21:11 UTC
Awww. You dedicated it to me~? ILU ♥

I LOVED IT. I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW THIS PAIRING EXISTED UNTIL NOW. XDD

As I've said before I got a little confused with the italicized words because I thought it represented their thoughts and didn't realize it was the characters speaking until I noticed that they were responding. Also the intro and setting of the story was kind of sudden but after reading it until the end, I saw that it fit the story perfectly. ♥

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