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[aworldallmyown]

so how cool would it be if you read this and gave me some feedback/criticism/grammar corrections before i send it in with my college application?

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[sweet_lil_jew]

I don't know you, but you belong to stencilxcore, as do I.
I love this essay.
I like how the paragraphs are separated by "I am," "I love," I believe," and "I do not care for."
I hope you get into wherever you're sending this, because it's great.
And the last line is amazing.
Good luck !
-Paige

[feistylatino]

now we are all in college- time freaking fies-- wow- insanity-- what happened to livejournal