LJ Idol: Topic 1/Week 1: Winding Up

Nov 06, 2010 09:04

I finished my sentence as my heart thudded in my chest and the flames in my cheeks began to die down. The embers still glowed on my olive skin as I touched my face, feeling the warmth. Seeds of doubt planted themselves in my brain as the professor moved on to the next student's comment.

People are going to think you're crazy.
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myrna_bird November 6 2010, 14:31:08 UTC
I agree. Sometimes, there is nothing so satisfying as a real passionate discussion to clear the air. I love how you wrote this.

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awriterswindow November 6 2010, 20:23:28 UTC
Thanks so much, both for reading and for the comment. :) And I wish we could all have more discussions like that without holding it against one another. Maybe someday! ;)

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basric November 7 2010, 00:53:38 UTC
Well done. I enjoyed.

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awriterswindow November 7 2010, 00:54:25 UTC
Thank you very much! I always appreciate when people read. :)

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nyxocity November 7 2010, 01:28:33 UTC
My passion is often mistaken for anger, and it has made some people turn away.

I know exactly what you mean. I don't get passionate as often anymore, as I've gotten older, but I used to LIVE for a debate. I understand the feeling of being too intense for people. You did a wonderful job expressing all of those feelings.

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awriterswindow November 7 2010, 02:00:30 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad that it came across that way. I definitely feel too intense for people sometimes, but when it's who you are, it's hard to tone it down. Perhaps as I get older? :)

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nyxocity November 7 2010, 02:07:05 UTC
Possibly :) Life gets busier and I do think we mellow a bit as we get into our mid-thirties. But even if it never "tones down" it's who you are. Nothing wrong with that. :)

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awriterswindow November 12 2010, 13:16:26 UTC
Thanks! :)

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antianhedonia November 7 2010, 01:34:31 UTC
I know what you mean and I need that song you quoted to be in my iTunes asap.

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awriterswindow November 7 2010, 02:01:04 UTC
Got to have some Ani DiFranco in there! :) It's called "Not a Pretty Girl".

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esotericsmile November 7 2010, 01:41:18 UTC
awesome post!

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awriterswindow November 7 2010, 02:04:44 UTC
Thank you very much! I enjoyed yours as well. :)

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