LJ Idol Week 4: Afterthought

Dec 03, 2010 20:06

Afterthought (n): an addition that was not included in the original plan.I thought I would meet him in high school, my true love. We would know each other, but not well. He would look on from afar, a secret admirer afraid to share his true feelings. When finally the secret came out, we would discover that we both adored each other and wanted the ( Read more... )

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banyangirl1832 December 4 2010, 01:54:59 UTC
Awwww. :) I'm so happy you found your knight, even if he drives a Scion and not a white horse.

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awriterswindow December 4 2010, 02:34:20 UTC
Haha the Scion isn't so bad...although I've told him that his next car will have to be a four-door. :) And thanks!

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solstice_singer December 4 2010, 02:09:31 UTC
I loved this! You're right. Reality is often better than the fairy tales we dream of. Sometimes, perfection isn't all it's cracked up to be.

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awriterswindow December 4 2010, 02:35:30 UTC
Thanks so much! I appreciate you reading. It's definitely a lot more fun not to be perfect and to be surprised rather than plan it all out (but naturally I still try to plan it all out!). ;)

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basric December 4 2010, 05:44:00 UTC
A lovely story written very well.

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awriterswindow December 4 2010, 13:44:34 UTC
Thank you very much!

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edith_jones December 4 2010, 22:03:03 UTC
My husband is better than any fairy tale. I'm glad that you found the same in your own life, and I loved the way you told it.
-Allie.

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awriterswindow December 5 2010, 14:51:37 UTC
Thanks so much! :)

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majesticzaichik December 4 2010, 22:09:22 UTC
Very sweet. I liked where this went.

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awriterswindow December 5 2010, 14:51:58 UTC
Thanks so much for reading! :)

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