Timelines

[axidentalquark]

A/N:  See, I really want Eleven/Master slashfic.  Because this season has made me love Eleven so much.  But I have been terribly busy with exams and all that, and now when I try to write Eleven, it comes out wrong.  Also, I don't want to spend a long time writing an epic fic when I a) suck at Amy's voice (the fic you will read/are skipping this

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[aqueousserenade]

The world needs more Eleven/Master!

I enjoyed the timey wimey-ness here. I don't think the Doctor would be thinking of a past liaison after all that has happened. It would probably take something like watching the happening itself to remember *g*

“Well - all right, then.” Amy grins again and seizes his hand impulsively, and then the Doctor instinctively reaches out his other hand for Rory, before he remembers that no one else remembers
Ouch, my hearts! :C (Errors usually fly over my head, but I did notice you've forgotten a period at the end of that sentence, coincidentally enough about forgetting...)

I thought your Amy voice worked really well, btw C:
So don't let that stop you from writing Eleven/Master ;D

[axidentalquark]

Thanks! ;D

I suppose it just sort of slipped his mind - one of those weird, random things that happen to him, which he attributes to weird timey-wimey stuff going on - and then he never connected the dots? ;D

RORY IS DEFINITELY COMING BACK IN THE SERIES FINALE.
(This is what I have been saying to myself since he died. I mean, the engagement ring = Chekhov's Gun, totally. I refuse to accept any other reality.)
Oh, blast. *headesk* Fixed now, thank you!

She was honestly like pulling nails to write. I kept going back and changing her lines, and then they'd get to the point where I just needed to rewrite it all, because the whole thing sounded so *jerky* ... but thanks, anyways. ;D

(Also, I feel the need to praise your icons more, because they are the awesomest thing ever. I am therefore using one. ;D)

[aqueousserenade]

I'm sure lots of people throw themselves at the Doctor (Amy is a rare on-screen example), he probably thought nothing of it *g*
(Though I'm sure Eleven went back in the TARDIS and squeed now that he knows it was the Master ;D )

RORY IS TOTALLY COMING BACK. EVEN IF HE HAS TO COME BACK AS SOME KIND OF EVIL BEARDY AU, CRACK-IN-THE-WALL!RORY >_______>

Fret not! Amy's only been in about ten episodes, bb. I really don't think the writers have had a lot of time to focus on Amy's personality. We got a good look at her character-motivation, but I think you can be a little flexible with her voice C:

(Thanks a lot, you're sweet♥)

[blackletter]

I love timey-wimey fics! The last line is particularly fabulous.

(And I'm totally with you on the problem of Eleven needing a Master, but Simm!Master doesn't quite work because the incarnations of the Doctor and the Master need to match.)

[axidentalquark]

Thank you! I hate endings, because I have difficulty with making things seem final, so I'm glad it worked for you. ;D

I know, right? Somehow Simm!M/11 doesn't feel quite ... right. Part of it is that I'm convinced that coming back from the Time War will make him slightly more sane/less drum-y, and I can't write a sane!Simm!Master, because that feels so weird ...

[evilawyer]

I've been meaning to come back and comment on this for ages, but time got away from me. Like this one very much --- the whole voyeuristic feel seems right for Eleven somehow, at least with regard to his seeing the Master at this point. Nice work.

[daughtermestizo]

YES. YES.

Oh, man! I love Ten/Simm!Master, and I love Ten/Eleven (which is practically non-existent), and this felt like a bit of both to me. Absolutely amazing!

D-M