Shadow Wars: Chapter 3

[aximilij]

So, my estimates on chapter 3 were at first pretty conservative. However, after I finished chapter 3 I moved onto chapter 4 without stopping to edit 3. Imagine my surprise when chapter 4 ended really fast, so, even though chapter 3 felt complete to me, the entirely of chapter 4 could be tacked onto the end of 3 so I just did that instead. So,

Comments

[odlar]

Finally got around to reading your Shadow Wars work. I don't know if it's your word choice, impeccable descriptions, attention to detail, or simply the fact that you write about the sorts of things that I'd go search for in a library if I read books anymore, but I love your work.

The only flaw I can point out is the lack of a space between the 4th and 5th paragraphs of chapter 2, but that's a rather small and pointless thing for me to make note of.

Excellent work; I look forward to reading more!

[aximilij]

Thank you, those lack of spaces are caused by how I convert to html. They're page breaks, but I have to copy the chapter out of the main document (since I haven't segregated it yet like I did with Ashura, and probably won't till it gets a bit bigger) and paste it in a new document to convert. So now, where ever there was a convenient page break, there is now no spacce. I'll fix that up later today.

I personally think that this is some of the better writing I've done, and I'm interested to see where it will end up. Maybe I might actually even finish it?