So, obviously I fell off the 'update every sunday' wagon. It wasn't doing much for me anyways. I have, however, done some work. Still nothing on Ashura really, but I did post chapters 4 and 5 of Shadow Wars. Nifty huh? Linkage:
Chapter Four Chapter Five
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Maybe it's just me, but I'd phrase that a bit differently seeing as how you've made such a big deal up to this point about Alex having an insurmountable amount of questions; perhaps say that the man hurried off before Alex could pick any specific question out of the many he had thought of.
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I'll think about it, I'm only going through some minor light revisions as I write these, mostly just a read through or two. Someday I'm sure I'll go back and sharpen some things up and maybe dull some of the foreshadowing, we'll just have to see how things turn out.
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