love sick part 4

May 17, 2009 20:52

Title: love sick part 4
Author: MEEEEEEEE
BETA : [info]skyz_xd *YAAAAAAAAAY I HAVE A BETA NOW ^^*
Pairing(s): TAKA YAMA OFCOURSE
Genre: I don't know you pick , people get sick, hurt loved and you know ...... Fluff/Romance/Angst
Rating: so far this chapter is also soooooooooo safe
Summary: Yama chan is sick, only Takaki knows his deepest secret , or ( Read more... )

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aya_no_michi May 17 2009, 18:29:28 UTC
*does that mean you liked it?*
I hope to update sooner cuz my beta is really great , makes me wanna write even more ^^

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skyz_xd May 18 2009, 03:34:22 UTC
y'know,
your English is already so good at the angsty part
I'm surprised
LOl if you keep doing your hard work
I don't think you need a beta anymore

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aya_no_michi May 18 2009, 20:17:05 UTC
WHAT@!@
no no no I want you as my beta , you do an amazing job yourself too, the angsty part just took me extra time cuz I wanted to make something *don't shock me ever or I will lose it*

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dazehyde May 18 2009, 20:12:35 UTC
Whoaaa... can't wait for the next chapter.
Your fic really make me want more *hehe*
Love TakaYama!!! ^0^

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aya_no_michi May 18 2009, 20:15:42 UTC
I am glad for that %^^%
I am not really sure where should I end this but hoping it will be a good one ^^
thanks for ur R&C

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ooh kathiekirbs June 28 2009, 13:47:36 UTC
ooh. now i know. hehehehehe. im very sorry for that silly questions. gommmeee. :]]

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Re: ooh aya_no_michi June 28 2009, 17:39:46 UTC
*O_o*
I dnt know what to tell you here!

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chibilover14 June 30 2009, 18:03:39 UTC
Takaki sighed, he didn’t know the reasons why Yama-chan was still acting sick and having all these weird mood-swings. He was really worried. Oh god, now he was being such a mom.
Pfft, dense Takaki! xD Haha a mom? XDDDDDDDDDDD But it's cute how Takaki ish worrying. xP

“Don’t worry Yama-chan,” Takaki whispered to the younger’s ears. “We’ll go home today and I’ll take extra care of you,” His voice was full of tenderness and protectiveness.
ASLIDFJ ASDFLAJWF;AS DKFS FLUFFY TAKAYAMAAA~! <3333 THIS PART ISH JUST TOO CUUUTE~! ♥♥♥

“I never told you those three words, maybe I’m waiting for you to say that to me? I know you love me because it shows on your face pretty clearly.” Yamada chuckled a bit.
Awww~ Yama-chan wants Takaki to just say it out loud. xDD HURRY UP, TAKAKI! LOL

“Yamada isn’t really sick but having a major insecurity problem.”
Awww~ Everyone has those insecurities. But that's really cute. xD

‘Amazing, he can still look so cute and innocent even if he’s confessing something that’s not really innocent at all,” The JUMP ( ... )

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aya_no_michi June 30 2009, 18:25:05 UTC

Pfft, dense Takaki! xD Haha a mom? XDDDDDDDDDDD But it's cute how Takaki ish worrying. xP
YAH he is way tooooo dense he needs someone to wake him up

ASLIDFJ ASDFLAJWF;AS DKFS FLUFFY TAKAYAMAAA~! <3333 THIS PART ISH JUST TOO CUUUTE~! ♥♥♥
I admit that my beta made this part way too perfect because the one I wrote first time was horrible!! No but I couldn’t help it myself IT IS CUTE

Awww~ Yama-chan wants Takaki to just say it out loud. xDD HURRY UP, TAKAKI! LOL
Awww~ Everyone has those insecurities. But that's really cute. xD
Yah I agree but you will find the next chapter flailable more and more

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OKAY WHO THE HELL CORRUPTED RYUTARO?! LMAO. xDDD Not so innocent anymore. xPPP
*coughDaichanchough*

Oh noes~!!! DARN YOU TAKAKI! LMAO Yamada's secret weapon. xDD So manipulative ne? xD Love himself? NARCISSIST I SAY! XDDD
His secret weapon must work on every one! Even Takaki

This fic ish full of love ♥ THANKS FOR THIS~! XDD ASDFJK AS; DFKAS FASK SO CUUUTE BUT SAD AGAIN. TWT EVERYTHING BETTER BE ALRIGHT IN THE NEXT ( ... )

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chibilover14 June 30 2009, 18:29:54 UTC
AOSIDFJ ASD;LFAW EFLKJASLDFAS LOL I HAD ALREADY READ IT A LONG TIME AGO. XDD The thing ish, I like to make (though they take forever) long comments to show meh appreciation and love. ♥ If you get what I mean. LOL

YOU DID?! XDDD YOU KNOW ME SO WELL THEN! ASLKDFJA S;DF ASKDFASDF *FLAAAAILS* <3

AND INOO WOKE HIM UP! Mostly Inoo. LOL Though he does have temper issues. XD

Way too perfect? Wha? LOOOL HORRIBLE?! NUUUU~! I DON'T BELIEVE THAT! xD CUTE CUTE CUTE!

LOL I didn't flail. xD Sowwie, I was getting really tired of quoting and commenting on a lot of TakaYama fics I hadn't commented on. LOL

D-DAI-CHAN?! OMFG I KNEW IT!!! WITH ALL THAT RAEP *COUGHS* ALSKDFJAS; K LOL

BUT TAKAKI THE MOST! XDDD

RABU RABU RABU! CONVINCED YOU WHAT?! LOL

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aya_no_michi June 30 2009, 18:47:59 UTC
EIFRPAGROHBVF*_(*RY#(}R NF*#ewyrfn84wcrd328476r37b27ntrfqu=NUMBERS ARE LOVE NE>
oh I am losing what I wanted to say!!

oh oh oh yah DAI CHAN IS THE YOU KNOW *RYUTAN SPOILER*
*oh you want me to send you the first version of Yamachan sleeping while his head on Takai's lap and almostkissinghimandnotwantingtowakehimup?* =that was as fail

you are the one convinced me kinda that TAKAYAMA ARE A PAIR ! though i would love to see YamaChii *hiding from being bricked*

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