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ayaa_chandesu

Cracked Surfaces

Jan 30, 2010 00:20

Title: Cracked Surfaces
Pairing: OnHo [Onew/Minho]
Rating: G
Genre: Fluff. Ish. But not really. D;
Summary: Sometimes silence speaks louder than words.
Notes: Beta'd and dedicated to my lovely eter_loves_yaoi because this is how much ilu lulz <3

( Most of the time, he kept it to himself, hiding the cracked surface under the superficial veneer of his gentle smile. )

fandom: shinee, pairing: onew/minho, rating: g

Comments 16

ayaa_chandesu January 30 2010, 00:22:55 UTC

Spot for rikli *hides under a rock*

ayaa_chandesu January 30 2010, 00:24:17 UTC

Spot for the lovely eter_loves_yaoi who this fic is for lulz. You and your OnHo bias ;p

eter_loves_yaoi January 30 2010, 00:27:55 UTC

omomomomommomomo~ ilu <3 but you know that already ^^ a sequel is much anticipated!

ONHO POWER! jinki seems to be a band!whore now... with all the onho, ontae and onkey

I cried again ;__; this time without my mascara ;p but srsly, it's too epis for words especially now with my lack of english word

<333333

ayaa_chandesu January 30 2010, 00:32:44 UTC

I know, a sequel D: It'll come to me when it wants to lulz <3
They're all hyungwhores in that group kekeke
*hands chu virtual tissue* Don't cry D:< This isn't even angst DX

eter_loves_yaoi January 30 2010, 00:45:35 UTC

I know it's not angst XD they're tears of joy/emotion/whatever/lack-of-sleep/jealusy-of-minho/whatever

the way I see it kpop is like a den of whores XD

pixziestikxz January 30 2010, 01:59:29 UTC

SDFHDGJDGFHIKHKIJHGJOLG. AWWW. :3

I LOVE ONHO. YES. IVE ALWAYS HAD A SPOT FOR ONHO.

AND I SHALL BE WAITING FOR A SEQUEL TO THIS. :D

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

ex_argh January 30 2010, 04:13:44 UTC

awww this is soo cute~ ♥ *cough* but a sequel would be good~ poor Jinki D: he needs to confide in Minho ^__^;

ex_argh January 30 2010, 04:18:23 UTC

ooops I didnt mean to reply to you @_@ I just... couldnt work out where to comment LOL *fails*

pixziestikxz January 30 2010, 04:19:08 UTC

LOOOL. it's fine. XDD

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weerainbow January 30 2010, 13:34:03 UTC

Oh such a lovely story…of the real love and dedication Minho has for Jinki :) It is beautiful
And he was willing to wait.
…I really love that line! It sums up Minho so well. He is patiently waiting for Jinki to learn to confide in him and open up his heart. I’m hoping that he will, because Minho will be there waiting when he does =]
A sequel would be soooo good if you get the inspiration for it!
♥♥

ayaa_chandesu January 30 2010, 14:27:55 UTC

Thanks for reading, I'll get to work on the sequel when I can. :)

aww mikaerayohiko October 28 2010, 11:58:52 UTC

D: this is good I hope there's a sequel xD *insisting* haha Imma track this :3