Aoi's thoughts

[ayamekofuku]

I sat there and watched the rain…I watched the gray view, the monochromatic colors which painted the animated picture, turning it darker and darker.The light in the bus was white, making it more easy for me to see the outside.Small raindrops started to stick to the window i sat next to.The bus stopped suddenly and some angry swears were shouted,

Comments

[silveryxdark]

Ah, that was so sad! But I really liked it <3

[urudear]

Ah ! This is so crushing my heart!
Poor Aoi *pets him* .
Was Uruha in the rain , cheating him or am I getting the story wrong?
It would be cute if you'd make a chaptered after this. ^^
I like it.

[ayamekofuku]

yes, uruha was cheating on him.to make a chaptered fic...yes, maybe about what happened that day before between aoi and uruha :3
just maybe...thank you^^

[redimagine]

Ah the song of rain. I really love this description, and I liked how you used "monochromatic" to describe the sky. I can see it so clearly, just one massive grey...