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ayamemishi

Fic: A Hundred Thousand Ways To Say No

Sep 15, 2011 01:32

Title: A Hundred Thousand Ways To Say No
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Characters/Pairing: Germany/Japan
Rating: PG/K+.
Word Count: 606
Summary: Germany is fascinated and intrigued by his old ally.
A/N: I wrote this a while ago, and thought it might merit posting on LiveJournal. Enjoy. :)

( Japan is a puzzle he's desperate to figure out. )

hetalia, japan, fic, germany/japan, germany

Comments 7

idraax September 15 2011, 06:55:57 UTC

I like it! Especially the part where Prussia threatens to announce it to the world. XD

ayamemishi September 15 2011, 14:39:34 UTC

Thank you! And yes, I just can't imagine Prussia letting Germany mope around forever...

shantari September 15 2011, 08:17:52 UTC

:) Quite nice.

ayamemishi September 15 2011, 14:39:47 UTC

Thank you. :)

charlzway September 15 2011, 09:08:15 UTC

I don't actually ship this pairing but... I really like the way you wrote this! For quite a short fic, you still managed to capture the essence that is Germany and even Japan (eventhough I think Germany stands out a lot here, perhaps due to it being told mostly from his POV).

It's very poetic in a not-too-overdone way and I like that!

And I really, really love this line: "Japan is soft-spoken, with a hundred thousand ways to say no..."

That speaks volumes of Japan's character with the least amount of words needed and I'm just wow...

Good job! :)

ayamemishi September 15 2011, 14:53:02 UTC

Thank you for your thoughtful comments. I'm glad I could get you intrigued by the story despite the pairing. I don't necessarily "ship" Germany/Japan either, but I think they have an interesting dynamic to play off of.

As you can probably guess by the fact I made part of that line the fic's title, I was a bit fond of it as well. :)

karinablue_rose September 15 2011, 16:58:27 UTC

That was lovely.I usually ship America/Japan but these two are starting to grow on me.