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ayase123

Tonight - Chapter 1

Jul 13, 2007 16:29

They would all admit that things got a little out of hand, alright, way out of hand, but no amount of guilty glances or unforgiving memories would erase what happened and strangely, none of them would change it if given the chance. It was their secret. Their moment of utter and indescribable bonding that would fade in time, but never be ( Read more... )

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cheonsang July 13 2007, 21:11:59 UTC

Omg your fanfic is love! This seems like a fun story that I'd be happy to follow :]

ayase123 July 13 2007, 21:20:40 UTC

thanks! ^^
it's going to be a super fun story!

azurehook July 13 2007, 21:19:53 UTC

zomg, that's awesome!!! * nosebleeds * Would love to see where this goes; hope you continue :).

sorry I don't have game suggestions...the only thing I can think of is one person holding a cherry in their mouth and the other person has to pluck the stem. and then tie it? yeah, it's lame, sorry ^^;;

btw, is that atobe and fuji in your icon? cute!

ayase123 July 13 2007, 21:22:34 UTC

cherries...hmmm, i can work with that ^^

yes, those are Atobe and Fuji plushies... I actually have Fuji, Oishi and Eiji, but not the Atobe. They bring me much joy~

rivieracacharel July 13 2007, 21:54:12 UTC

i am loving this hahah

i think this have a good and promesing concept
can't wait to see how this will develop

i hope you up- date soon so i can can see who will be punished next

oh and ''The hyungs were dismayed to find Changmin the biggest both hard and soft''

i love this part ,secretly i think changmin actaullly is teh biggest among them .... ever since i saw that RS performance from 2006 hi-seoul fesitival

hahahah so that made me laugh ..^.^ cuz you got them in the order i'm thinking about

ayase123 July 14 2007, 21:25:22 UTC

yeah, i really just imagine him to be the biggest, and not because he's the tallest, but because it just seems likely. ^^

hope you like my next installment - coming soon

angel_ehron July 13 2007, 23:39:56 UTC

LOL!!! OMG this is great!! I can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon.

Great job!! <3 XD

ayase123 July 14 2007, 21:26:06 UTC

thank you, thank you!!

seanix6amp July 14 2007, 00:30:42 UTC

That was definitely a waay new and cool idea.. Love it!

ayase123 July 14 2007, 21:27:47 UTC

thanks! I kept searching for fics about them playing games, but there weren't many, so I decided to write my own... unfortunately, it won't be too realistic since i'm way out of my teens and can't remember too much of what it was like being curious and what not. i hope for this fic to at least be funny and amusing =)