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ayase123

My Immortal - Chapter 1

Jan 31, 2010 00:06

The ornate sitting room was dim with candlelight, always a favorite atmosphere of his friend Yoochun. Nothing much had changed over the years, even their faces remained the same, and though their communication had dwindled, Yoochun owed him and it was time to call in the favor.

“You’re as brooding as ever,” Yunho said, approaching the ( Read more... )

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ayase123 January 31 2010, 05:28:24 UTC

lol, I'm on my way back to your new chapter to leave a comment ^^

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ayase123 January 31 2010, 05:42:01 UTC

thanks! yes, it's totally different, a little brooding Yoochun is good for the soul ~ hehehe

Ah, you should feel sorry for Changmin, I won't say too much, but yeah... he gets the short stick in this fic.

jangwoohyuk35 January 31 2010, 05:52:24 UTC

Not a fan of YooSu, but i'll totally be reading for the YunJae in this <3 hehe i like the plot :)

jangwoohyuk35 January 31 2010, 05:54:19 UTC

Oh and sniffles...i'm sad that Minnie is not liked in this :(

ayase123 January 31 2010, 05:58:01 UTC

Ah yes, the YooSu, sorry about that, I wrote this a long time ago, before I got into my YooMin phase ~

Min's story will unfold more and he'll get his redemption. ^^

jangwoohyuk35 January 31 2010, 06:13:11 UTC

No worries, I'll still follow this fic :D And bb..i'm so happy that you are now a YooMin fan haha...like so so happy! <3 <3

kurogoma January 31 2010, 05:56:27 UTC

i am not sure you intended it this way, but i feel sorry for changmin the most out of all of them......his sorrow is not as obvious and hidden behind his flippant attitude but he knows more than any of them, exactly how it feels. the irony...

ayase123 January 31 2010, 06:00:12 UTC

i'm glad you feel sorry for Changmin, I was hoping he wouldn't come across as a meanie, his feelings will be revealed more as the story goes on and he has a key role in the plot...

yes, the irony... this is a short fic, about 5 or 6 chapters, so you'll see how the irony plays out even more soon enough ^^

raindrop_symph January 31 2010, 05:57:52 UTC

wow..
i like this..
i feel sad for yoochun..
the one he loves is in love with someone else..

ayase123 January 31 2010, 06:01:07 UTC

*thanks*

yes, I suppose we'll feel sorry for all of them at some point, but no worries, I write happy endings (can't help myself). ^^

raindrop_symph January 31 2010, 06:09:58 UTC

yay!that's good then..love happy endings..

senseikk January 31 2010, 06:08:02 UTC

Wow... What a twisted plot! I really like it! ^^ There seems to be many interesting love triangles in here. Can't wait to see what happens next!