Tonight - Chapter 3

[ayase123]

Yoochun debated on relieving his sexual tension in the shower, but a different, more enticing tension awaited him if he hurried, so he forewent his routine and quickly washed his hair.  Since no one had set the rules for who came first last night, he figured no one would be punished.  It would be unfair if they tried, but tonight…Yoochun was

Comments

[cheonsang]

Aww I loved the ending ;3 I love that game btw.. Keep writing its really good~!

[enchanted1312]

omg, this chapter was so funny that i laughed out loud. XD i mean seriously, Min eat cardboard??? taht's so damn cute, lol, even though he was little, but still, cute! lmao, more? i cun wait to see the results!

[guu_dammit]

oww Godddd please PLEASEE post the new chapter soon!! I laughed so much!!!! I love this so far!!! (and damn its been long since my last I Never game XD)

[himekohimura]

idky, but i can not read this story and listen to dbsk at the same time. Your games are inventive and hilarious as well as interesting!

Keep up the good work and I cant wait to read the next chapter~

[dakara_zhang]

it's so cute and funny, i was smiling (and bursting out in laughter) the whole way through. i love how it's so easygoing, but tense at the same time.
and, haha, "i've never eaten cardboard."? *slightly guilty* er, does paper count? >.>